Comments | andrealyn: Title: Lend Me Your Heart

andrealyn

Title: Lend Me Your Heart

Apr 10, 2011 15:24

Title: Lend Me Your Heart
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own them, not today, not tomorrow, not even with hats.
Word Count: 12,574
Summary: It’s the last time Steve sees Danny Williams before his whole world changes. Three years after Danny leaves Steve and Five-O, he comes back, ready to bring Wo Fat to justice.
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pairing: steve/danny, fiction: hawaii 5-0

Comments 8

kitmerlot1213 April 10 2011, 21:01:37 UTC

Oh man, I could actually see Steve being that desperate to get Wo Fat that he'd start taking stupid risk but I'd always hoped that he'd listen to Danny and not do it.

And the pain between Steve and Danny is just devastating to read but it does give me hope that they still so obviously care about each other.

andrealyn April 15 2011, 00:45:08 UTC

Thank you for reading!

lillyg April 11 2011, 00:21:37 UTC

I bawled my eyes out half the story... I'm all snotty to go to sleep now... It was a great story. Though to me Steve wouldn't do that from a start because he cares about people and victims.

andrealyn April 15 2011, 00:45:27 UTC

♥ I offer tissues, always! Thank you for reading!

abbeyrd62561 April 11 2011, 03:38:06 UTC

I am enjoying this so much. Danny couldn't pull Steve back and in the process they divorce. I think how you wrote that was so well done, down to where Steve doesn't even know where Danny lives. And Rachel not even telling Steve where Danny lives or his new cell number. And now to find out as they sat all night for survelliance That Danny took the case finally for Steve and that he's been watching Steve and that's how he knew Steve was in the hospital. I hope Steve doesn't mess this Wo Fat thing up and listens to Danny. But I can see how Steve would be upset that Danny's been watching and knows what's going on with Steve yet Steve didn't know or feel it and had not seen Danny or anything else...Excellent job I just love how you write it's not the same things there is a good plot with their feelings involved...I always know when I see something you write it will be good.

andrealyn April 15 2011, 01:14:06 UTC

♥ Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such lovely feedback.

oberstein April 12 2011, 06:01:21 UTC

You really know how to bring the pain in fic. It just leaves me feeling like this:

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andrealyn April 15 2011, 00:45:47 UTC

DON'T WORRY CAPTAIN KIT-KIRK. ONE DAY ALL WILL BE WELL.

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