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andres00

Two old men

Jan 31, 2009 12:50

Title : Two old men
Rating: Brown cortina
Paring: Gene/Sam
Disclaimer: this men belong to the BBC and Kudos
This fic is for my adorable beta wobble-duck

Tyler coughs again. He's waited until I walk out of our bedroom. What a fool he still is.

He's sick, not a surprise, he's in his mid 60's, an old man. No wonder he's often sick. He's a bloody weak man ( Read more... )

philip glenister, gene/sam, life on mars fanfic

Comments 12

blodwen January 31 2009, 04:10:05 UTC

Awwww *sniffle* Very touching.

andres00 February 1 2009, 14:23:48 UTC

Thank you, your icon is lovely!

altorogue January 31 2009, 04:42:07 UTC

Oh wow. I really love you bringing AIDS into it, and then revealing the real reason Sam's wasting away. It makes an eerie sort of sense that Sam is tied to the day he 'died' in 2006. I love it love it love it.

andres00 February 1 2009, 14:27:28 UTC

Oh, the AIDS thema would be great too. The idea of Sam's death just walked into my mind, and once I thought about it, I couldn't help but to accept it as a logical ending. Although I wish they live forever together.

timelord_sammy January 31 2009, 07:23:40 UTC

An amazing little story, very moving and an interesting look into Gene and Sam's relationship. It's quite a different view, to see them when they're older. It is sweet how Gene contemplates their relationship, and the way they love each other, and it's also quite sad to see them in pain, physical and emotional.

Great work on writing Gene's feelings and his inner thoughts. Very beautiful.

andres00 February 1 2009, 14:36:17 UTC

I always their old days, because they are the ones to deserve a peaceful old age. We all want they have their happy life after all these things, don't we?
And I thought the narrator must be Gene who would never thought he might loose Sam Someday. Actually the man doesn't like the contemplation. So his rough but honest telling is always good to hear. Thank you.

timelord_sammy February 1 2009, 21:46:24 UTC

because they are the ones to deserve a peaceful old age. We all want they have their happy life after all these things, don't we?
Very true, (and great thinking actually) I like the idea a lot better than Sam just disappearing in a car accident after a few years of deciding to stay in 1973.

You're welcome =)

andres00 February 2 2009, 16:45:43 UTC

The accidental end of Sam is so absurd and unfit with the great drama. I'd never understand why BBC rejected the LoM special two parts show. Their budget of LoM was really a disaster.

dorsetgirl January 31 2009, 10:54:34 UTC

I haven't got time to read this properly today, but already I'm crying from what I have read so far. This is wonderful, so sad and touching, I really love it, and I'm sniffling here with other people in the room. I never do that! There are so many beautiful sentiments in this, I will be reading it again and again. Thank you.

andres00 February 1 2009, 14:44:00 UTC

Cry with you. I'm surprised at your reaction which is very moving. But the new experience looks like a good one :D Sometimes we need the strange and wonderful feeling we can't control. Actually I thought my idea was going to be too weird. I worried that no one would read this old men story. But I'm very glad to know that is a needless fear thanks to you.

seileach67 January 31 2009, 13:41:46 UTC

Awwww. *sniffles* This was wonderful and heart-breaking in a good way. I really felt their love for each other and how sad that their life together is coming to its inevitable end. Beautiful job.

andres00 February 1 2009, 14:49:48 UTC

Thank you. And you're right. Their love is always wonderful. But the surviving love during their lifetimes is very heart-breaking.
I think Sam is afraid of losing Gene after he lost their parents, but his life is always full of surprises including the huge wonder Gene Hunt.