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Public Displays of Affection Comment Porn Battle

Apr 11, 2009 08:25

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Time for everyone to let their inner Exhibitionist out of the closet

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anonymous April 13 2009, 00:42:02 UTC

You didn't think about Jack and Ianto.

It was easy not to.

Jack was freely affectionate to the point of obscenity with everyone he met, or nearly everyone. Ianto was no longer a shadow in the Hub, but he was still quiet; he made jokes and all, but he really only spoke when it was about Torchwood business, or when spoken to. He seemed to prefer it that way. Gwen and Tosh had tried to draw him out a little, and Owen had tried to antagonise him out, but he blithely ignored their attempts and since he seemed reasonably happy (for Ianto) they left him to it.

Nope. Didn't think much about Jack and Ianto, Jack-and-Ianto, until...

Well, until you came across something like thatTosh could see him working at the desk she still thought of as Suzie's, despite it having been more or less annexed by Ianto. Really she could just see a strip of Ianto's pale skin, a flash of the deep red shirt at throat and wrists, peering as she was between two monitors at her desk and two tall shelves near the workbench that mostly blocked him from view. She ( ... )

andreth47 April 13 2009, 00:50:48 UTC

Don't be shy, we've had several ficlets that were PG-13-ish (incl. mine).

And maybe you're not very porny, but you're definitely very voyeuristic! ;) I love the way you describe the colors in Tosh's little glimpse. And how nice that we're getting so much Tosh love around here, that makes me happy.

used_songs April 13 2009, 01:08:28 UTC

I loved this. I love the way you framed it.

blue_fjords April 13 2009, 01:14:15 UTC

Yeah, I did a couple of PG-13-ers, too. This is an inclusive porn comment ficathon thing. And yours was very lovely! Love Jack winking at Tosh at the end, then following Ianto into the shadows. Love the little glimpses of a shirt here, a tongue there.

alba17 April 13 2009, 01:16:46 UTC

oh, it's beautiful, anon. Just lovely. You don't need anything explicit, it's getting a bit warm in here even without it. :D Love Jack's look directly at Tosh and the wink, haha.

51stcenturyfox April 13 2009, 02:05:52 UTC

It's really great, shy anon... especially the bit about Jack knowing Tosh was watching the entire time.

Loved it. :)

andreth47 April 13 2009, 02:13:21 UTC

Yes, I liked that aspect of it too, thanks for reminding me. :)

thrace_adams April 13 2009, 03:27:50 UTC

Oh no need to be shy...this was deliciously naughty and easily made me feel the most voyeuristic...like I was watching something I shouldn't. Well done!

rexluscus April 13 2009, 03:38:26 UTC

Beautiful! All the more erotic for being non-explicit.

mad_jaks April 14 2009, 19:32:52 UTC

I love it. It's very Tosh and you portray her fascination with the scene in front of her beautifully.

unfeathered April 15 2009, 08:58:41 UTC

Don't be shy! This is beautifully-written and definitely hot! :-)

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