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[azuraangel05]

Title: Don't Move, Don't Speak, Just Listen

Fandom: Desperate Housewives

Pairings: Andrew/Justin

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Don't own a thing.

Summary: Sooner or later you have to deal with the people you leave behind.

Comments

[denzelryuu]

oh my god... it is so nice to see the perspective of Justin... Love your fic... I really hope there will be a happy ending for these two though... and by happy ending, i mean them getting back together :P

[denzelryuu]

sry, not sure if there is any edit option

I noticed that you had Justin walking home, but midway through the conversation with Andrew, Justin suddenly has a car?

[denzelryuu]

sry... just realized a few more things.. if Justin is really really drunk and hence why he was kicked out of Kyle's party, then shouldn't he not be driving in the end, regardless of how he obtained the car?? Also, why is Justin backing out of the driveway?? I thought they were at the pizza place Andrew works at?

[azuraangel05]

Runs off to fix several mistakes. Should really get a beta.

[azuraangel05]

I'm glad!

[hennahito]

Great confrontation of Justin and Andrew!
Is that a one-shot? *coughhopenotcough* ;D

[azuraangel05]

Thank you for the feedback and, yeah, it's a one shot.

[carnesfan]

great, great, great!

gimme more! please!

[azuraangel05]

Hee. Glad you enjoyed it:)

[ufohelena]

Oh, I love it! You've done a really great job. Please write more ;)

[azuraangel05]

Thank you:)