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[andthentherewas]

i've got no words these days
a bird came
and stole them all away
i havent quite decided whether it was an albatross or no
someone told me to be clear
i resent that
i am more transparent than most
look of my forearms
you can see my veins dancing beneath
these blue lines have not been pierced for years

Comments

[voiceless_muse]

my god your words....
how i adore seeing them
here and there and everywhere.
let me pierce those blue veins
baby...i am good at it! :)

[andthentherewas]

i know you are lover
and i dont want to be pierced by anyone but you

Personally, I think your words are beautiful...

[ex_scorppoe]

Clarity I've found, at least in the written/poetic/meaningful sort of way, is ambiguous at best. We all read and interpret through a filter of our own experiences. Things that are clear to me are murky to others. I take for granted, sometimes, that when I write I know the full story and my readers only can nibble on the breadcrumbs that I leave them. Maybe this leaves them hungry for more or frustrated that I have not given them the full slice/loaf/whatever...

I don't know the answer to that. What is clear to me, is that your words are, without fail, beautiful, intense and meaningful. You are as clear as you need to be. And, I think for the most part, more transparent that most. Your breadcrumbs always seem to be larger, giving your readers more satiety than most. But again, I'm not sure that matters. No matter how transparent you decide to be or not to be, what matters is that your writing leaves you full.

Re: Personally, I think your words are beautiful...

[andthentherewas]

your words as always float to me on a cloud of wisdom
you dance across oceans as beautiful as the endless oasis
thankyou for showing me your kindness and support