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[aneasywayout]

Title: Absolution
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: Donghae/Eeteuk
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2707
Summary: He felt dirty and sick as the sweat beaded and rolled down his body but that's what he felt of himself anyway.
Disclaimer: Here if it's really needed.
Notes: Contains slightly religious themes don't read if this kind of thing offends you easily.

Comments

[covermeblack]

Is unable to post coherent comment but Donghae's "voices".. D:
I felt bad for the poor kid.

[covermeblack]

Forgot to add, I liked it yo. ^^
Excellent job there, looking forward to your other fics! xDD

[aneasywayout]

D: omg I didn't break you did I?

Thanks for reading ^_^

[miharu_fics]

TeukHae.
I can't even express how much I loved this.
My favorite part was when Teuk came into Hae's room and said that line, "There's nothing wrong with you".

Simply wonderful. ♥
-mems-

[aneasywayout]

Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it. :] That was one of the key parts.

[xmare_imbrium]

Omg hot ** Thank you for writing this. I totally love TeukHae. <3

[aneasywayout]

My pleasure. Thanks for reading :D

[dreamrainydays]

I really liked this. Especially this line:

'If sin had a taste he was willing to bet it was salty'

You managed to invoke so many emotions - one being anger at Donghae's AU!parents. I'm guessing that they were strictly Christian and rather old-fashioned in their view of homosexuality, telling him it was a sin and he was an abomination? I really, really hate that. I've a friend who's gay and who is in a Christian family, and although his mother is the kind to love him anyway, his father's not so much. And he had a lot of problems reconciling his religion with his sexuality (and has now decided he's atheist, because he was unable to). So, yes. I loved how you handled that. And if it wasn't meant to have a religious overtone, I probably just read too much into the wording at times.

'But he could see the bead of sweat start to roll down the side of the older boy's face and he fell back against the bed in defeat. A stain marring Eeteuk's white canvas, he'd tainted the perfect aura that surrounded the boy somehow by letting him be here

[aneasywayout]

Wow I'm not even worthy of the comments I've been getting on this story. Thank you so much this review was amazing. I didn't set out for it to hav e the religious undertones they kind of developed on their own but I know too many overly zealous religious people and it's really a shame.

If there's anything I hate it's a powerful story that people completely ruin at the very end with magical solutions that wouldn't happen in real life. If you write about real situations they should have real reactions to the problems that face them. I hope I at least gave some glimmer of hope to poor Donghae's life though I do love to torture the ones I love most :[

Thank you soooo much for reviewing it means a lot. ^_^

[32406]

you already know how much i liked this but i'm commenting here anyway.

like i said, i thought it was put together really well. it wasn't just pointless smut, and it's refreshing to read a story with some depth and a good backstory.

bonus points for letting me have a field day with my invisi!redpen.

[aneasywayout]

I know how you love your invisi!red pen ;)

I also love how I almost wrote hoe instead of how. Must be a force of habit ;*

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