Bad Sex & Awkward Romance: a comment-a-thon

[anenko]

Bad Sex & Awkward Romance
a comment-a-thon
Dreamwidth | LivejournalI love awkward romantic declarations and sex scenes. In an attempt to encourage people to cater to my desires, I bring you a comment-a-thon

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[anenko]

Skip Beat! Ren/Kyoko, At least the chicken suit kept her from running away too quickly, or: Ren confesses his love, and Kyoko reacts as well as can be expected.

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[amarielah]

A/N: I don’t know how the hell this got so long, but here it is.
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As wonderful as fresh air felt against her overheated face, Kyoko just couldn’t bring herself to be happy about this particular turn of events.

“Mogami...san.” His eyes were very wide. “So...all this time...”

It was then that it surged through her - pure instinct, fight or flight. With every ounce of strength she could muster, she bounded for the exit; and, seeing as she was in a chicken costume, “bounded” really meant “stumbled”.

He was in front of her before she had even made it halfway there, easily blocking her from properly making her escape. Even if she’d still been physically capable of reaching her destination, his eyes - with some black sorcery, no doubt - seemed to have pinned her in place. She could tell that he was angry, and it was made all the worse by the fact that he wasn’t smilingShe considered falling to her knees and begging his forgiveness, her words of apology already resting anxiously on the tip of her tongue. But she was frozen in place,

Part 2/2

[amarielah]

His eyes narrowed. “Because you wouldn’t purposefully try to misinterpret this confession if I said it to you normally?”

She opened her mouth to protest, only to close it again a second later. Because it suddenly occurred to her that Tsuruga Ren was in love. With her.

Her eyes went out of focus as her brain tried to process that little tidbit of information, and it took several long minutes of deliberation before Kyoko could formulate an adequate response. “Have you tried...um...not being in love with me?”

His lips thinned in obvious frustration. “That’s not even a remote possibility,” he said.

A sigh passed through her lips. “You know that my heart is frozen and black, Tsuruga-san. There’s no way for me to return your feelings, especially considering that it would do neither of us any good.” And with that, a new fire spread outward from her belly, overriding the fear and the shock and the emotion-that-was-definitely-not-happiness. With renewed vigor, she grabbed his hands and pulled them off her shoulders, holding them in front

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[anenko]

Your Kyoko is so perfect.

“Because you wouldn’t purposefully try to misinterpret this confession if I said it to you normally?” Ha! Ren knows her so well. And her "have you tried not being in love?" line was fabulous.

I love how thoroughly Kyoko twists everything around so that it suits her view of Ren, love, and the world. She's going to end up killing the poor man. *g*