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Bad Sex & Awkward Romance: a comment-a-thon

Aug 21, 2011 12:26

Bad Sex & Awkward Romance
a comment-a-thon
Dreamwidth | LivejournalI love awkward romantic declarations and sex scenes. In an attempt to encourage people to cater to my desires, I bring you a comment-a-thon ( Read more... )

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XMFC, Charles/Erik yahtzee63 August 21 2011, 19:27:55 UTC

FANDOM: X-Men First Class
Pairing: Charles/Erik
Prompt: They got quite good at the nuances of psychic joining during sex, eventually. But it didn't go so well the first time.

Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 1 of 2 ceitfianna August 23 2011, 03:26:21 UTC

(This turned out slightly more serious than I intended but the prompt inspired me. I hope you like it ( ... )

Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2 ceitfianna August 23 2011, 03:29:03 UTC

He groaned and kissed Erik, their bodies slipping against each other and carefully lowered one wall then there was heat and desire and noticing the smoothness of his own underwear. It was disorienting and Erik stopped and stared at him before saying, “How much of that was me ( ... )

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2 tresa_cho August 24 2011, 01:22:17 UTC

Oh this was lovely.

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2 ceitfianna August 24 2011, 01:24:43 UTC

Thank you. I was really happy how it all came together.

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2 dodger_sister September 8 2011, 00:29:23 UTC

How did I miss this before? Guh. I loved that even when they were flirting, they still managed to sound so them.

Action tied with desire made time slip away and shirts and pants were thrown off with laughs and groans and as he felt his own erection move against Erik’s through their boxers, he heard a voice in his head say, Let them down.

See, I would think psychic sex would be hard to write, but you did it perfectly right there. That line said everything about how they fit together and I can hear Erik's voice in my head, and it was delicious.

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2 ceitfianna September 8 2011, 00:32:11 UTC

Thank you. This fic completely surprised me as it just came together in my head. I love them both so much and thinking about how they simply get parts of each other and then still have much to learn.

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