Fic: Poker face (1/1)

[angel1605]

Title: Poker face
Author: Angel1605
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing/characters: Ten/Donna
Genre: Humor, romance
Rating: PG(-13)
Word count: c. 3000
Disclaimer: I don't own them.
Summary: The Doctor has to play a game of poker to get out of jail and Donna has to use an unorthodox method to ensure their freedom.
Author's note: This is a one shot for now, but I

Comments

[time_converges]

Hee!! Oh, I love this - distracted and then protective Doctor, and flirty and teasing Donna. Oh yes, she has the womanly wiles. :)

[angel1605]

Oh yes, she most certainly does! :P I first wanted to let Donna point out to the Doctor that she has womanly wiles after all, but I figured that the Doctor was tormented enough as it was :P
Lovely icon, btw! ;)

[tkel_paris]

Oh, boy... I thought Donna would yell at him because she figured out that was a sure-fire way to distract their guards enough to ensure their freedom! Instead she challenges him to THAT poker?! Oh, I like it! :D It'll be fun imagining how THAT game goes!

[angel1605]

Haha, that will be fun indeed! It would be a rather nice subject for a sequel I think ;)

[sczep84]

This was so incredibly awesome. Seductive Donna and a rather distracted Doctor make for a terrific ff!! Thanks so much for sharing!

[angel1605]

Thanks again! <3
I'm delighted that you liked this fic so much :D

[sykira]

Guh! Oh this is astounding. You describe his reaction SO well. It's tangible :) Go on Donna saving the day! And then the part afterwards when he was concerned she might be upset *melts into a puddle of happy goo*

I love all the little looks too, I can so see it in my mind.

and then the end, gah, killed me! So sexy and flirty and fun! I for one cannot wait for the sequel, this was delicious!

(PS one tiny edit, you are using 'empathizing" when I think you meant "emphasizing" :)

[angel1605]

Thanks so much again for leaving such a beautiful comment again! <3

I actually really had to suppress the urge to get into angst territory when writing this. Even though I kept telling myself that it would be wrong for this fic, I kept ending up writing that Donna was a lot more upset by all this than she should be in such a not so serious little fic :O

I have some pretty defined plans for a sequel so it should appear here sooner or later :P

Thanks for pointing that out! I keep misspelling such words :O Just like I already noticed that I wrote 'vintage; instead of 'vantage' right after posting this *goes to correct mistake*

[sykira]

Yup, I'd have been hard-pressed not to have her have a tiny wobble too but then would she admit that to the Doctor? I dunno. It worked well as you have it :) but never be afraid to go with your gut, hon. I like your instincts, especially when it comes to character stuff.

[angel1605]

I actually woulnd't have mind exploring Donna's more upset reaction at all, but that part where they walk back towards the TARDIS and the Doctor expresses his concern was the last part that I wrote, although it's not the last part of the fic. I wanted to keep the current ending and that wasn't angsty at all, so I really had to prevent from keeping that last part that I wrote 'light' as well. But I'll certainly write lot more Doctor/Donna angst in the future ;)

[bas_math_girl]

I wonder what exactly caught his attention... I'm sure he mulled it over. ;D

[angel1605]

I'm sure of it too ;)
Thanks again! :D