The Love that Never Was

[angel_b33]

The amazing bas_math_girl has been encouraging me for a while now to write something, and I've been resisting, because frankly- such things should be left to the experts and people with a talent for it.  But today, in honour of the Great One's birthday....I wrote a teeny tiny thing.

Rated G.
Word Count - 703
Please be kind!
So apologies here's my story (unbeta'd) (

Comments

[sandyosullivan]

Statistics and probabilities, you know the way to BMG's heart!

THIS was so beautifully written. Good lord, what a turn of phrase. I'm wondering now if writing is your discipline field? Lovely... thanks for sharing it around mate!

[angel_b33]

Aw, thank you, *blushes*.
Nope - well, not fiction/creative writing. Longwinded reports and letters, yeah ;) I feel a bit of a fraud for even writing this and putting it up considering that there are so many talented writers on here!

[10docandr]

Great Job!

[angel_b33]

Thank you!

[bas_math_girl]

*claps hands delightedly*. You did it! YAY! I can't tell you how happy I am that you wrote this...and then you wrote this on my birthday!!! Oh wow!

I really think you should write lots more fiction; you are naturally gifted, love. And I'm not just saying that cos you used trains, statistics, probability, newspapers or even memories. :) they helped, obviously.

You've just made my day! Not that I'm saying you don't normally, but you've made my day extra special! Thank you!!!

xxx

[angel_b33]

*claps too*
You liked it? Well, as you know, it's been percolating a while now! I decided ages ago that I'd try to put it up for today for you. Aw, I'm glad it went some way to making your day special.
I'm so chuffed you liked it! Happy birthday again, xx

[lifefailsme]

This is terrific! Your writing is compelling and imaginative. I really like it.

The angsty undertone is striking and you should defo consider writing more imho. :)

[angel_b33]

Thank you! *blush*
I might just you know....

[sczep84]

This was so very beautiful. Beautifully written, bittersweet, love it!

[angel_b33]

Thanks!