Leave a comment

Comments 1

Brava! thewolfsmoon February 16 2016, 01:19:15 UTC
This was absolutely Sublime! Did you probe my mind at some point while I was sleeping?! ;)

As far as I'm concerned, you nailed Angel's inner dialogue.
Although it may not show until season 3, I'll argue to Pluto and back that this, the first time he saw his life without Cordy after she'd barged into it, was when he first started to feel for her.

My only criticism is that you didn't do the scene when Angel rushed into the hospital room and tried to reach Cordy while she was strapped to the bed thrashing and screaming as the doctor pumped her with a potentially harmful amount of Ativan.
I wanna know his inner dialogue during that incident, what his mental reaction was when the doctor revealed that she'd been in that condition for HOURS(Holy crap, umpteen watches and that still hits me hard) and how it turned out. Did the visions reach a stopping point finally, how many more drugs did they shove into her?

Reply


Leave a comment

Up