Now i really hope that Sasuke kills her to free her from her misery.
I really need to catch up... and i love how you incorporated Wonderland into this story... i have a thing for wonderland because the name of my shop is called wonderland ;)
Hello again, hopefully you remember me, the oh so wonderful Dr. Rambler! I just hopped over to this page to see what else you had posted and I thought this was the same chapter as the one you posted on FFnet, but good thing I decided to read it because it wasn't!
I love how you are developing the plotline, now I understand why you rewrote the story so many times, but your grammer is a little off, some past tenses here and there that shouldn't be there and whatnots, but other than that it's looking great! If you need someone to go through and proofread for grammer or tense fixings, I'd be glad to [because I am such a freak with proofreading things that I go through my stories five different times to proofread it, or I get too lazy and don't proofread at all!], and no I won't leak the chapters onto the internet even though people would love me if I did because your story is so amazing ^^. Have a nice day and Merry [late] Christmas!
i really suck in tenses/grammar thingy >___<. plus i'm always in a hurry to fix things D:
thank you so much in advance! i'd beg for your awesomeness! yaaaay, so happy to find you! :) and thank you so much for being honest! :D thank you, really! (cos i really want to hear from someone who'll really criticized me, no, no, not a flame that attacks me as a person XD cos i know there ARE lots of mistakes in there)
Re: Bravo!born_readerDecember 28 2009, 18:32:41 UTC
I am a spaz about English, it's a horrible habit but I don't mind. I always find myself looking for errors even when I'm reading books, and I do find some but I have to fight the urge to fix them because I don't like marking up my books @____@.
So how do you want to do this? Should I start on chapter one and go through it and then email it to you? I can use Word and highlight the places I find errors and fix them if you'd like ^______^ or I can just highlight the errors and let you fix them?
is it really okay to start from chapter one? :D i really don't want to bother you HEEHEE ^____^ i can e-mail chapters one to thirteen. they're in Word format. :))
thank you thank you very very much in advance! and sorry for bothering you! :)))
That was really awesome 8D You centered this chapter on Sakura's side, I found it amusing since Sasuke on the other hand tries to contact her worriedly XD Oh.. she knows how to take care of herself. It is true, there are some grammar mistakes... but it's understandable here >.<"
I started liking Sakura even more after this. o/ Hope that was one of your goals XD or something like that.
About "awesomeness"... lakjskajja XD Omg! I felt pressured by the green line! XDD *brain explosion*
Good luck pupps! And try not to cure your insanity completely, you enchant us with it ;D
Comments 50
I really need to catch up... and i love how you incorporated Wonderland into this story... i have a thing for wonderland because the name of my shop is called wonderland ;)
Reply
thank you for the comment! eyaaah, i think i should update often. so sorry, i'm very lame with my updates. :DDD
Reply
Reply
off topic: your avatar>>> is SO CUTE!
Reply
I love how you are developing the plotline, now I understand why you rewrote the story so many times, but your grammer is a little off, some past tenses here and there that shouldn't be there and whatnots, but other than that it's looking great! If you need someone to go through and proofread for grammer or tense fixings, I'd be glad to [because I am such a freak with proofreading things that I go through my stories five different times to proofread it, or I get too lazy and don't proofread at all!], and no I won't leak the chapters onto the internet even though people would love me if I did because your story is so amazing ^^. Have a nice day and Merry [late] Christmas!
Reply
i really suck in tenses/grammar thingy >___<. plus i'm always in a hurry to fix things D:
thank you so much in advance! i'd beg for your awesomeness! yaaaay, so happy to find you! :) and thank you so much for being honest! :D thank you, really! (cos i really want to hear from someone who'll really criticized me, no, no, not a flame that attacks me as a person XD cos i know there ARE lots of mistakes in there)
so thank you very much! *so happy ^___^*
Reply
So how do you want to do this? Should I start on chapter one and go through it and then email it to you? I can use Word and highlight the places I find errors and fix them if you'd like ^______^ or I can just highlight the errors and let you fix them?
Reply
is it really okay to start from chapter one? :D i really don't want to bother you HEEHEE ^____^ i can e-mail chapters one to thirteen. they're in Word format. :))
thank you thank you very very much in advance! and sorry for bothering you! :)))
P.S: your avatar= LMAO. :DDDD
Reply
Reply
umm. next year. yesh. definitely, January 2010. hopefully. :D the draft's done already, i'd just have to type it. thank you so much! :))
Reply
That was really awesome 8D You centered this chapter on Sakura's side, I found it amusing since Sasuke on the other hand tries to contact her worriedly XD Oh.. she knows how to take care of herself.
It is true, there are some grammar mistakes... but it's understandable here >.<"
I started liking Sakura even more after this. o/ Hope that was one of your goals XD or something like that.
About "awesomeness"... lakjskajja XD Omg! I felt pressured by the green line! XDD *brain explosion*
Good luck pupps! And try not to cure your insanity completely, you enchant us with it ;D
Reply
eyah, oneword.com is amazing :)) but really hard. wah! and thank you for being honest, shuu-chyaan! :D
Reply
Leave a comment