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Aug 01, 2006 23:42

Here's a little fic (which turned out to be quite long) that jumped up and grabbed my brain while I was at work. Enjoy! (And thank you to Bridget for the beta!)

Fatherhood )

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agirllost August 2 2006, 04:15:05 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

That was excellent and I really hate Stephanie. Great Chase voice, too.

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libbi August 2 2006, 15:04:36 UTC
Very sweet and sad. :)

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shelley_winters August 2 2006, 17:02:50 UTC
Oh god, that is so adorable.

Chase is such a great dad even when he has no clue what to do! *hugs him and Chloe*

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genarti August 9 2006, 21:00:18 UTC
Oh, that's awesome. :) Poor Chase, and poor baby, and yet youc an already tell that it's going to work out all right for them.

(Tiny nitpick, though -- you switch to present tense for a couple of paragraphs right when Stephanie says "Bringing you your kid," and then back to past of the rest of the story.)

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angela_edmunds August 10 2006, 10:22:04 UTC
Hee! drat Milliways with the tenses.

Thanks for commenting! :)

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geeky_agent August 10 2006, 23:53:49 UTC
This is really good. You should post it to 24_fanfic. There's a dearth of good Chasefics.

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angela_edmunds August 11 2006, 00:30:34 UTC
...that sounds like a very good idea. ;)

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angela_edmunds August 11 2006, 00:34:17 UTC
*grins* And thank you!

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