He should have known better

Sep 18, 2008 01:47



He should have known better

Title: He should have known better
Author: Angelcat2865
Summary/ Spoilers: House's POV after Wilson parting speech in Dying Changes Everything.
Rated: PG
Disclaimer: Only mine in my dreams, otherwise House, all it characters and dialogs belong to David Shore and Bad Hat Harry Productions.
A/N: Betaed by Californiaquail  
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Beta? angelcat2865 September 18 2008, 13:14:08 UTC
Hey, thanks for reading.

I thought about putting a line in there about how much Wilson hurt him, but then I figured House would mainly blame himself.

I have already found and corrected 3 mistakes this morning, is there anything else that needs correcting before I post to the other journals?

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angelcat2865 September 18 2008, 19:30:09 UTC
I decided to go ahead and post. I have read it through several times and tweaked it to make it read more smoothly. Wish me luck.

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dreamsofspike September 18 2008, 20:09:30 UTC
okay, this brought tears to my eyes :( soooo sad and so true.. poor house, wilson just set him back so much :( great writing, hon :)

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angelcat2865 September 18 2008, 20:22:18 UTC
Thank you! That means a lot to me coming from you.:}

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lhoma320 September 18 2008, 21:41:43 UTC
So glad you decided to pick this thread up and run with it. Because the show ran past 9:00, my DVR flickered. I heard Wilson say he enabled House all these years and he was wrong to do that and he wasn't House's friend but was there anything else??? When it finally started up again Wilson was out the door. :( I guess I want to know what is the real reason??? Wilson can't look out for him anymore? He has to look out for himself. That's what Amber taught him.

Hope you write more. I'm interested. :D

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angelcat2865 September 18 2008, 22:46:22 UTC
Hi! Thanks for reading.

"I guess I want to know what is the real reason???"

Basically Wilson told House that he was the reason he was leaving. He said that all House does is spread misery, because it is all he can feel. Wilson also told him that they were no longer friends and he was not sure if they ever were.:( I hope that answers your question.

"Hope you write more. I'm interested"

I really intended this to be a one shot, but I will give it consideration. I do plan on writing more fiction as my muse strikes.;)

Thanks again for reading.

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lhoma320 September 18 2008, 23:01:00 UTC
OMG, that's what a co-worker told me but I didn't believe her. She said that Wilson said he wasn't sure if they ever were friends but that's what I missed. That makes me so sad.

I wasn't happy with this past episode. I've liked 13 in the past but thought they were spending too much time on her. Then I was so happy when Wilson said he didn't blame House for Amber's death. I think the thing that still bothers me is that Wilson wanted him to risk his life for Amber. You know House thinks of him as a friend because House said okay when Wilson nodded Yes to his question.

You how sometimes you say hurtful things to the ones you love. I'm hoping that is why Wilson said those things.

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angelcat2865 September 19 2008, 00:00:45 UTC
I hope so too.

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angelcat2865 September 18 2008, 23:59:58 UTC
Thanks Misanthropicobs. Your comments are always so insightful. I always look forward to reading your comments on other stories and I feel really honored to have one here.

Yes, I can't believe that Wilson's parting words could have been meant to cause anything but pain. And like you I am afraid that House will see it as a reason to pull farther into himself. I hope we are both wrong.

Thank you for the suggestion for the sentence change. I see you point and it is a good one. But I think the sentence works better for the quote following it the way it is.

Thank you for reading.

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angelcat2865 September 19 2008, 01:47:21 UTC
Hi, thanks you for reading. I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Don't worry about not leaving a long comment. After reading my comments to your wonderful stories I am sure you know that I am not very good with the long thoughtful comments myself.;)

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