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Oct 28, 2008 20:34

i feel nothing
when you hold my hand.
i stop breathing,
i stop feeling--
anything else.
(10.28.08)

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this is the best i can do right now. it's been a while since i wrote something, so be nice!!! haha. CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms allowed. ^^

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EMO ALERT!!! noquieropuerco October 31 2008, 04:37:44 UTC
omg jen, ur so emo. slit ur wrists too while ur at it, why doncha ;p haha!

pero pwede, pwede...

basta wag ka lang degenerate sa level nina miley cyrus or jonas brothers. EVER! >:D

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Re: EMO ALERT!!! angeldusty October 31 2008, 22:01:07 UTC
hahahaha!!

i guess i've been listening to a lot of emo songs lately, hehehe.
plus i can't write anything happy or cheery or whatever you call it, hahaha. i mean, it was supposed to feel nice and all, but when i write it down, it sounds so emo. haha. :P

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