New Story...
Let me just give some back ground for this story. My creative writing teacher gave us an assignment and it is about two lovers meaning secretly. The catch is that the story is to be written using as much, if not all in dialogue. So this is what came out in the end. Hope you enjoy.
Secret Meeting For Love, By: Lauren Jewell Sroka
"I have missed your kiss, sweet Margaritte!" Xavier let his hand run down Margaritte’s soft cheek.
"We are going to get caught!" Margaritte explained.
"Stop worrying so much Margaritte, we love each other and if our parents don’t see that then they are dumb, and stupid!"
"I know Xavier, but how do I tell my mother that I am going to have a baby, without them coming to kill you?"
"Margaritte, you mean the world to me. I know that we are only seventeen, but I can’t live without you!"
"What are you saying Xavier?"
"I am saying that I cannot live without you and that I want to be your husband."
"Oh! Xavier! But how do we get away from our parents? How are we going to afford this? I have only five hundred dollars in my savings account."
"You worry to much. Haven’t you ever seen the movie Sugar and Spice? They were both seniors in high school, just like us, and they made it work."
"The girl also robbed a bank with her cheerleading squad." Margaritte said giving Xavier an evil eye. "I am far from being a cheerleader!"
"Right! You are only one of the smartest girls at our high school. We could put our money together and buy ourselves a house. We could both get after school jobs, and once we finish high school, I could get a full time job, and you can go to the community college. We could do it. Please think about it!" Xavier stated
"I don’t know Xavier! But it doesn’t matter right now. I am not even showing yet. We have at lease five more months to worry about it. Let’s talk about something else please!"
"Ok you win, like always. What do you want to talk about?" Xavier asked Margaritte.
"How about baby names?!"
"That makes me go back to worrying how we are going to support the baby and ourselves!"
"No honey! Let’s just think about what names we like, you know if it was a boy or if it was a girl. What do you think?! I am going to need help on that any ways."
"Ok, ok. I will do it. What are your ideas?"
"Well..." Margaritte started to say, "What is that nosie?"
"Shhhhhh..." Xavier whispered
"Margaritte, Margaritte! Are you out there?" a voice calls out
"It’s my dad!" Marrgaritte whispered with a quiver in her voice
"Margaritte! If you are out there hiding from me with that boy, I will kill him!" Her father said
"Oh please, Xavier! Let me go to him. I could just tell him that I was out here thinking."
"No, Margaritte! We need to stand out and tell him NOW!" Xavier said
"Please no! I can’t deal with this right now!"
"Margaritte the sooner we do it the better!"
"I think I am going to throw up!" just then Margaritte leaned to her side and threw up.
"Dear God! Give me the strength to stand up to him" Xavier said to himself
"Margaritte, Margaritte!" Her father continued
"Margaritte, here is an idea. Why don’t we just go sleep in the club house tonight. Just one night more together, before all hell hits the fan. What do you think?"
"The club house?"
"Yes, the club house. That way we can be safe from everyone and everything. Maybe we can even come up with a plan before we go and talk to our families. Plus we and discuss baby names too. Well..."
"Ok! That sounds like a better idea then going and facing my father. I don’t want him to hurt me or my baby."
"Me either!" With that, they both crawled to the club house, without being seen by Margaritte’s father.
"I love you Margaritte" Xavier told her
"I love you too, with all my heart." They were now safe and locked inside the club house. In the distance they could both still hear her father yelling her name...
"Margaritte, Margaritte! Where are you?"