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Isabella's Indiscretions

Apr 15, 2010 13:17

Title: Isabella's Indiscretions
Author: AngelGirl171
Characters/Pairings: Gwen, OC's, Merlin, mentions of Morgana, Uther, Arthur
Rating: PG
Discliamer: I do not own Merlin, only the plot of my story
Spoilers: Takes after 2x13
Summary: The lady Isabella - a good friend of Uther - stays for a year at Camelot. Gwen is required to be maidservant. The two ( Read more... )

fandom: merlin, character: uther, character: gwen, fan art: fanfiction, character: morgana, character: arthur, character: merlin

Comments 7

saurina April 30 2010, 13:12:49 UTC

Hey bb. I hope it's this story, you refered to in your PM. Okay here we go...

I think you have establised a very good start for a story. You've captured Gwens character, showed us her thoughts in regards to feeling alone without Morgana and her father, and also giving clues toward Merlin, being her best friend. All good..:D

Now as I see it, the story really begins with the arrival of Lady Isabella, and the meeting between her and Gwen. Lady Isabella seems to be a kind noblewoman, one who could possible be an alliance for Gwen in beating her loneliness away, or she could be the opposite due to the cliff-hanger you ended the story with. Cliff-hangers is always a good thing, cause it leaves me with wanting more.

I think you have the beginning of an intriguing story, so keep up the good work and on to the next chapter.

Hope this is what you meant, when you wanted me to read the story and give my opinion on it...:D

angelgirl171 April 30 2010, 13:46:40 UTC

thank you. I was really nervous what people would think about this story, caus it´s my VERY FIRST story. i really like arthur/gwen togethor, but i want to make point with this story that gwen is more then just arthurs love interest :)

saurina April 30 2010, 15:11:11 UTC

I think it's VERY good for a first story bb..:D

And you are soo right, Gwen is definitely more than just Arthurs love!

kasie101 May 8 2010, 19:48:31 UTC

you have nothing to worry about. your story is definitely interesting.

i really want to know what relation this lady has with our gwen - she seems far too interested.

and i'm glad that you're writing a story just for gwen.

can't wait to read more! :)

angelgirl171 May 9 2010, 13:38:23 UTC

thanks for reading it. Gwen is AWESOME enough to write a story just ABOUT HER. i want to make a point with this story that Gwen is more then just Arthurs love interest (but i absolutly adore her with Arthur)

osept May 15 2010, 20:45:23 UTC

i love it. can't wait next chapter

angelgirl171 May 16 2010, 00:54:33 UTC

thankx for reading it :D