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[angelical_azi]

((OOC: A solution to the problem we've been having. This may be turned into a fanfiction, eventually, once it's beta-d and all that jazz. Any suggestions are welcome. Any comments IC are too. As usual, I claim no ownership of the characters used. They just like to posess me every now and then. It can be quite fun.))

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[crowley666]

((Hmm...looking at it now, I'd say less fluffiness. It needs to flow better through the last part of Aziraphale's little talk. More input from Crowley needed --seems a bit 2D. Don't know who it would seem better coming from. Maybe as a drunken conversation. Yep, alcohol is fun.))

[stardusted_lady]

((Don't make it a drunken conversation, that's the easy way out :P I'm not sure I buy Azi being the one to figure this out, either. He's not the sneaky sort, really. It is a very good plan, though.

Is this all after the end of the book? If so, they might stumble upon this idea after realizing they didn't get in trouble for the Arrangement when they were caught...

Or, if you want to make it ironic, they could both be ordered by their superiors to do exactly this; Azi could be ordered to try to bring Crowley home, while Crowley is ordered to tempt Azi. After all, they've had loads of blind luck already...what's a little more?))

[angelical_azi]

((But drunken converstaions are so much fun! Yeah, Azi was always reluctant to question, so it makes more sense for it to be Crowley. Part of me just wants to give him a bit of the spotlight. So I think if maybe I keep Crowley to the first part and Az to the second bit because it's not like demons to discuss hope.

Yeah, it is after the book. And on second thoughts, I like the blind-luck thing. Actually, it fits in rather nicely. And then they could go on to talk about why.

Either way, I want less fluff. I don't know what's wrong with me. Stupid fluff... I think I need to get a character who isn't in a relationship. These two are affecting me. It's just not right.))

[stardusted_lady]

((*pets and comforts* You need to come to the Dark Sanctuary. We're all insane, but DarkSages=Love so it's ok.

It'll knock the fluff right outta your system, though.))