Fanfic: ZoroxLuffy

[angelicmeroko]

This is the first 'challenge'. Writing in english wasn't as easy as I had tought so it took a little more time than I tought. But here it is! I hope you like it. ^^ Oh and it's like first fanfic I've ever wrote, so please don't be too harsh ^^;;

STARTO!

It was like any other day at Going Merry. Luffy was causing mayhem and
complaining how hungry he

Comments

[angelicmeroko]

Awww, thank you ^^ You can't even guess how much that boosted my desire to write more fics! ^^

And yes, I should probably find a beta reader....ummmm... Dunno where I'll find one, but I think I'll meet someone if i really need one :]

And now I'm off to write the other challenge fic >w

[crystal_chan]

Awww, this was cute. Poor Nami.

I loved Zoro and Luffy's accidental kiss though. X3 And Zoro's reaction to said kiss amused me, that it did.

Your english is indeed better than you give yourself credit for, but there were still some minor errors. A beta reader would probably help.

Overall, though, this was adorable and I'd like to see more from you. ^^ I do hope you write more soon!

[angelicmeroko]

Thank you! ^^

I'm just trying to put my nevest piece of art in ff.net, and I'll link it to here. So you don't have to wait for too long ;]

[grimy13]

^^ Hehe! Nice job and very cute! Thank you!

[angelicmeroko]

No problem, and thank you ^^

[memo_chan]

this sooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ^///^
i love it
"If you weren't my friend, I would steal your shoes..." << loool so kyoot >///

[angelicmeroko]

Ha ha xDD I couldn't even remember this one. Oh Gods. I had a field trip while reading it. It's only been year from that but I can't believe how horrible my english was back then XD -rolls on the floor- But thank you! The ending was pretty random 'cause of the challenge but anyways xD

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[anonymous]

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