it's writing like that that leaves me feeling dazed and my mind silent, like when you finish a good book. It takes you up in it and then when you're released you don't know what to do with yourself. i remember that from the last time, i think.
Yes it's the same story. I just added some things in the middle and some things at the end because... I didn't feel like it had enough closure. Thanks for the compliments! *happy Inuit dance*
If you'd put hard returns between the paragraphs I'd be able to read it better. Right now I can only get through about half of it before my head starts hurting :(
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