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angeluslovr in angelovesdawn

Broken But Not Dusted

Jul 04, 2009 08:57

Los Angeles:

Dawn tossed and turned in her bed. The screams from the other room were getting louder and she glanced at the clock. Three a.m. She was beginning to think he’d never get tired and go to sleep. It was times like these that she seriously wondered if staying with Angel was such a great idea. She sighed and put the pillow over her head. It ( Read more... )

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sorry... angeluslovr July 4 2009, 16:03:43 UTC

Hi guys, sorry I'm new to LJ and I accidentally posted this without linking it. :( Please don't flame me--it wasn't on purpose. I'm just trying to get the hang of this, so any advice on how to post would be greatly appreciated! :) :)

If you like the fic though...please let me know. Feedback is totally appreciated and it feeds the muse...

xeelia July 4 2009, 23:02:42 UTC

OOoooo! This is good!! There will be a second part right??

thanks for the review angeluslovr July 5 2009, 02:26:55 UTC

Hi xeelia...

glad you liked it so far. yeah, there will be more if I can figure out how to post WITHOUT taking up a whole page. can you help???? I can't figure out how to crop it and link it. Any help would be SO appreciated!!