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angelpi74

Escape 4/?

Jan 08, 2007 23:04

I know I know - I took too long didn't I. But I do have a really good excuse - the words would not come. This was the hardest part to get right - I know where everything goes after this but I needed to set the puzzle up just right ( Read more... )

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angi_is_altered January 8 2007, 14:53:32 UTC

Oh poor Cam and House!

angelpi74 January 10 2007, 11:55:40 UTC

I know, but I need to show them suffering before they can fix each other. I wan't overly happy with this chapter the next is coming along much better - should be up soon. Thanks for the review.

smquigel January 8 2007, 16:50:54 UTC

So glad you updated. I've been wondering how this would play out. Glad to see that Cameron got her gumption back and yelled at him, but I do hope he doesn't give up on her. Excited to see what's next

angelpi74 January 10 2007, 11:56:48 UTC

Thanks for the comments - it plays out nicely, this chapter took a while it just wouldn't play right, and I'm still not happy with it. The next is much better!

blue_crystal_9 January 8 2007, 20:51:55 UTC

I loved Cameron's reaction to seeing House, and the conversation they had. :) Really great job!

angelpi74 January 10 2007, 11:57:41 UTC

Thank you! I was worried it seemed false. Just wait for the next one it is a lot better.

dil_deal January 9 2007, 08:49:05 UTC

Oh, House, she doesn't really mean it, go after her!
Update, please :)

angelpi74 January 10 2007, 11:58:40 UTC

The update will be along shortly, give me 24 hours give or take. Thanks for reviewing though!

fairyfloss_love February 18 2007, 18:26:52 UTC

Okay, so I heard about this story, and it is great, I really like both your House and Cameron
... *runs off to read the rest*
oh...
The number of times he questioned her ability to love as a need to fix the broken and here he was wanting to do the exact same thing he teased her about.
That line is just perfect.