Understanding Pneumonia

[angelsnear]

Pneumonia, despite modern medical treatments, is still a serious illness that usually takes place during the winter months. Especially an issue in the elderly, no one is immune to pneumonia, and often the simplest of chest colds can turn into this sometimes critical condition. Pneumonia, by definition, is an inflammatory illness of the lung. The

Comments

[kor27]

Nice little essay, dear - and I fully understand why you did it - but I'm sort of curious. It seems like the second-to-last paragraph should be three separate ones. In fact, it looks like you might have meant it that way.

At the very least, the jump from the aspiration "class" to "healing" in mid-paragraph is a little jarring.

Jess sayin'...