Comments | angeltrisha9: Sometimes you have to die to live again.

angeltrisha9

Sometimes you have to die to live again. - a♥r drabble

Feb 18, 2011 13:12

Sickbay was quiet. It always was this late, but tonight the silence was heavy and uncomfortable. So was Bill’s heart. He sat in the chair next to Dee’s bed, her delicate hand in his. Her fingers were cold from the blood loss. The bandage around her head was a stark contrast to the soft café au lait skin.

They shouldn't be here.

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Comments 8

tayryn February 18 2011, 18:43:07 UTC

aaawww...

this was very sweet! i really liked it!

angeltrisha9 February 19 2011, 03:51:25 UTC

Cheers darling!

sln1 February 19 2011, 17:30:30 UTC

It really is interesting to consider whether it would have made a difference had Dee survived the gunshot. Dead she was another sorrow to add to the burden, nothing could bring her back or make things better, but alive? Alive perhaps she could have looked like a second chance, jolted Bill and Laura from beneath the weight of their grief at least enough to let them reach out to one another, to start to heal.

This is a very poignant and thought-provoking scene you have depicted. Absolutely lovely. Thank you

angeltrisha9 February 22 2011, 16:05:52 UTC

That was the hard part for me with this challenge because whomever you chose, it would change the outcome of the show in a way. I mean, yes, it is just one drabble, but those deaths built something, you know?

And She was always the one to talk some... Not quite sense, but hope I guess into Bill so when she died that was just Whoaaa! Who's gonna tell him things like they are if Laura's unraveling and Dee's gone, So yeah.

I'm glad you liked it :)

vash26 February 19 2011, 21:55:49 UTC

This scene is really heartbreaking. I feel so sorry for Dee, she didn't deserve the ending she got. Thank you for giving her this ♥

angeltrisha9 February 22 2011, 16:01:53 UTC

I know, she was sort of the hope part of the show and for her to so... I don't know, brutally shot herself in the head without warning was just a wee bit wrong and so heart wrenching. I'm glad this pleased you.

sczep84 February 21 2011, 16:25:21 UTC

I loved that u gave Dee this, I was so sad for her in the show. She deserved better :(

angeltrisha9 February 22 2011, 16:06:25 UTC

She really, really did. All the time. I'm glad you liked it sweets! :)