Comments | angeltrisha9: If you let the pieces fall, you may never get them back

angeltrisha9

If you let the pieces fall, you may never get them back - a♥r drabble

Mar 11, 2011 00:21

Her guest quarters had become her sanctuary. Bill had offered her refuge on Galactica the moment Baltar assumed the presidency. He’d helped her move and had given her all access to the battlestar and his books. She’d immersed herself in them and his quiet company. Only Bill didn’t look at her with regret, pity or smugness. Of the three, she ( Read more... )

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kastari March 11 2011, 07:27:39 UTC

Last line = LOVE!!

He uses fall. She uses fell.

I liked how you used the prompt for this drabble.

angeltrisha9 March 11 2011, 16:06:19 UTC

He he! :)

Thanks love, you're the best!

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angeltrisha9 March 11 2011, 16:01:43 UTC

Thank you!

sczep84 March 11 2011, 11:03:41 UTC

Love the last line. The drabble is perfect for how Laura must have felt!

angeltrisha9 March 11 2011, 16:05:44 UTC

Cheers darling! It would have been interesting to see, right? How she went down and everything?

defyingnormalcy March 11 2011, 17:08:19 UTC

Oh! Love this! That last line is SO Laura.

angeltrisha9 March 11 2011, 20:34:27 UTC

Sweet!!! I'm glad it is. thank you! :)

redrockcan March 11 2011, 21:58:27 UTC

Love the banter in this drabble and especially the last lines. I can see Laura agreeing reluctantly, with Bill the voice of reason!! Great work!!

angeltrisha9 March 13 2011, 16:08:24 UTC

And such a great voice to reason with! (had to, sorry)But that is one scene I would love to have seen. Among others!

Thank you!