Camera Obscura - a♥r drabbles

[angeltrisha9]

Yo, yo, yo...  So the muse has finally decided to hand me something.  It was grudgingly done with a disdainful pout and a contemptful flip of the hand but damn it, after three months she owed me!  That whore. *sigh*  Oh well.

Thanks to defyingnormalcy who saved my butt in a pinch. ♥♥♥

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Comments

[nixmom]

I love this take on the prompt. You're fourth paragraph is delightfully sweet and sexy all at once. well done.

[k_d_456_345_a]

Surely you mean the 3rd paragraph?

[bsg_aussiegirl]

No, I'm with Nix, the 4th was very sexy somehow.

[angeltrisha9]

Sexy is good. :D

[tayryn]

and your muse awarded you well!!

i VERY much like this!! wonderful job, and very interesting use of the prompt!!

[angeltrisha9]

Don't encourage her. she's already pretty smug!

And thanks! You know me, I can't do simple, I gotta twist shit around! ;)

[somadanne]

This is beautiful and truly choked me up.

This line is gorgeous:

a splash of life against the black backdrop of space.

And that last paragraph is so spot on--I can't even tell you how good it is.

[angeltrisha9]

Wow. Thank you! I'm really, really happy you thought this worked well. Thank you!

And I love your icon, even if totally makes my heart clench.

[k_d_456_345_a]

A great idea and well-executed. I feel sure that Bill had been attentively storing away many internal pictures of Laura. And then we get "And he carried to the raptor..." and my heart squeezed.

[angeltrisha9]

the heart squeeze is inevitable in those circumstances. Sorry! But I am glad the rest was pleasing.

[defyingnormalcy]

You already know that I love this - but I want to tell you again <3

[angeltrisha9]

Awww! thanks! ♥