J's LJ Party - Another Gift

[angelzqq]

The video you requested is in the previous post sissy.  Here's the story.  The one shot that would never end, lol  I have no idea why my under the cut thingy isn't working right but it's not, so no surprise here, lol

Title:  Cooplee Again (just because I'm too tired to come up with something more clever, lol)
Disclaimer:  Not my characters.  They

Comments

*sigh* Perfect

[jailynn24]

♥ I know that you were unhappy with this story, but there REALLY wasn't a reason to be. This story made me smile, made me laugh and filled my heart with joy. It was everything I could have hoped for. And I know you are thinking, "So bias, Sissy." And while that is true, it doesn't make anything I've said a lie. Brilliant job! ***hugs*** I loved it.

Re: *sigh* Perfect

[angelzqq]

I thought I responded to this already but I must have lost my mind *laughin*. I'm so glad you liked it sissy. And yes, I'm thinking "so bias, sissy", but I'll take it. I always know I have at least my twin cheering me on. I can't even tell you how thankful I am that I happened upon your LJ and you became my twin *huge huge hugs*.

twinnie

[jyl22075]

Okay, so I loved this and I have reasons, so hopefully this doesn't get all ramble-y.

First off, I love that you mentioned that Ashlee still struggles with the urge to eat. That is something that the show really dropped the ball on and I'm sure it's something she still has to deal with.

Secondly, I love Ashlee's conversation with Buzz. You write a great Buzz. His advice was excellent and I could actually see something like this playing out on screen.

Third, I think you really showcased Coop's hurt and the reasons for his actions. I really like that you wrote him kind of vulnerable, which is something I've never managed to do. Really great insight and totally believable.

Lastly, I'm really impressed that you didn't vilify Beth. I always want to make her evil. *laughing* I think the fact that she accepted it and realized she wanted Alan was very mature.

So, anyway, that was probably more feedback that anyone ever wanted, so let me just say once again that I loved it. ♥

[angelzqq]

*huge ass grin* I love that you gave me reasons. I struggled alot with this story. J knows that, cause I told her constantly, lol I felt like it wasn't flowing. I felt like it wasn't how they'd sound (and I always want my stuff to read like what they would actually say or do). I worried that Coop would come across woosy and that I should write him angrier. And I really worried that Beth not being the villain would upset everyone.

Now you probably think I'm ramble-y, lol Thank you so much JJ for your thoughts on my labor of love for all of you. It means so much to me! *hugssssssssss*

[anonymous]

I really loved this Sharon, it was filled with all kinds of emotions! And, you made it so real and filled in the blanks that GL neglected, as usual! :P So many things were left undone with this couple. :( I really enjoy all of these fanfics because tiic want us to think that Cooplee's love never even existed. Thank you for helping to keep them alive! Hugs! Aus

[angelzqq]

Thanks so much Aus. I'm so glad you liked it. I always worry, lol *hugs* Sharon

[anonymous]

*Sigh* that was so perfect. I loved it. It was sweet, it had a little angst, Beth did the right thing, and Cooplee love won. I also loved Buzz. As far as I am concerned-Buzz is the man!!! You did a fantastic job. I would love to see this actually happen, but I don't think I will. Thanks for making it happen in the world of fanfics.--BettyB

[angelzqq]

*grins* Thank you so much Betty. I'm so glad you liked it. It makes all my worry worth while, lol *hugs* Sharon

[eertyecal]

Loved the story Sharon. It was so sweet and too loved how you so perfectly brought out Coop and Ashlee's feeling concerning the break-up. TIIC have us believe a real love story just went down the tubes and the next day if was if their memories were erased. Thanks for giving us the "real" story. You are a brilliant writer, but then since you & Jai are *twins*, I wouldn't expect less. You both rock! **christmas hugs**

[angelzqq]

Thank you so much Tracy. It's incredibly flattering to be compared to J and not pale. I'm glad that you liked it. *hugs* Sharon