Close Encounters - Chapter 3

Mar 03, 2009 22:31

Two things about this post.  First, I feel like it's a lot of blah blah blah (J browbeat me to post it anyway, lol).  Second, it's short.  Word count is 1403 (J browbeat me to post it anyway.  Isn't she a brute?  *laughin*).  Because she's such a great twin, I caved and posted.  Hope you enjoy *smilin*.
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Chapter 3 )

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anonymous March 4 2009, 04:31:21 UTC
I really like this story Sharon. I hope you keep writing, you really do have talent and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I loved the banter between Coop/Ash in this chapter and when Buzz was teasing Coop, I could clearly see Buzz's smirky grin. You captured him perfectly. **hugs**

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eertyecal March 4 2009, 04:33:02 UTC
Sorry forgot to log on. It's definitely passed time to go to bed. Good-night. Trac

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angelzqq March 4 2009, 23:30:07 UTC
lol I thought it was you. Thank you so much girlie. I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the encouragement so much. *squeeze hugs*

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jailynn24 March 4 2009, 13:01:50 UTC
See, I know you want me to feel guilty for forcing you to post this, but I don't. *wicked grin* It was just what I needed to start my day off right. I love all the back and forth you had going on in this chapter and I can't wait for the next one. *whistles innocently* Not that that is a hint or a demand or anything... *grin*

Ashlee laughed, dodging the towel he tossed at Daisy. “What kind of books do you write?”

“Unfinished ones” he said, laughing self consciously.

Oh Coop. I can so relate. *laughing* **hugs and love**

~Sissy

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angelzqq March 4 2009, 23:46:54 UTC
You brat *laughin*. You sure you don't feel guilty? lol And omg at you hinting ALREADY. Sheesh, lol I'm glad you didn't think it was blah blah blah. And I didn't even realize it when I was writing that but yeah, you can relate *laughin* I appreciate you so much!! *HUGE hugs and so much love sissy*

twinnie

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jyl22075 March 4 2009, 18:47:28 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you posted a new chapter because I love this story so very much. I really enjoy all the banter between the Cooper's... and I love that Daisy and Buzz are both trying to push them together.

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angelzqq March 4 2009, 23:20:37 UTC
Awwww thank you. I'm glad you liked it *grins*. I didn't want to post it cause it was so short and it was alot of blah blah blah, lol, but I had J watch something so I could know what was said and it made her eyes bleed so she blackmailed me *laughin*. Thanks for the love girlie *hugs*

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angelzqq March 4 2009, 23:43:32 UTC
Thank you so much JJ *grins* I'm so glad that you liked it. I thought it was a lot of blah blah blah, so it's nice to hear that it didn't come across like that. I really appreciate your feedback and your comment love. *lotsa hugs*

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anonymous March 5 2009, 14:34:01 UTC
I looked for a new chapter daily and when I didn't see one, I sorta's quit looking for awhile, but what a great gift to find one today. I love this story. I also love how you write. I think this would have also been a terific way for Coop and Ahslee to meet. Please continue. I am hooked. I love the fact that Jailynn "browbeat" you to continue. You have a gift for writing and I'm always excited when you share with us!--BettyB

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angelzqq March 6 2009, 01:25:44 UTC
Thank you so much Betty! I was on vacation for a couple weeks and wasn't able to write, but I have been working on it. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comments. You're always so kind and encouraging and it means so much. I'm glad you like it and I'm flattered that you like my writing *smilin*. Thank you! *hugs*

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