Close Encounters - Chapter 4

[angelzqq]

I felt pressured with this chapter cause I promised that I'd post on the weekend.  When I feel the pressure, nothing comes, lol  Thankfully, something came eventually *laughin*  Here you go...
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Comments

[jyl22075]

Yay! I loved this chapter and the dynamic between all the girls. I like that Ava and Lizzie are friendly and that neither one seems to be out for Ashlee's blood. Not to mention, they are all right about Coop's hero complex.

[angelzqq]

Thank you JJ *smilin* I wanted it to be chaos and I wanted everyone to get along and I wanted the turmoil to come from them, not from outside sources. I hope that I accomplished that. I hope everyone can visualize this chapter as they're reading it. If they can see what I saw when I was writing it, it will make sense. Thank you so much for your encouragement girlie! *hugs*

[jailynn24]

So I hopped on because I just woke up from my nap and still feel like crap. Then I see this and it made me feel a lot better. I loved the chapter and I can't wait for more. Thank you so much for putting yourself through this for me. **hugs** You are the best twinnie I could ever ask for. **hugs and love**

~sissy

[angelzqq]

Awwwww. I'm sorry you're still not feeling well *hugs* Thank you for reading and always giving me love. I have the best twin too *grins* It's cause I love ya that I do this cause you know how I get about writing these things, lol I hope you feel better soon. Miss you! *hugs and love*

twinnie

[eertyecal]

I loved the easy bantering between the girls and poor Coop, I could just see him rolling his eyes and wondering how he was gonna get away from this. Buzz ever the wise father, he always knows what's best for his son. I just love that guy. You did awesome girlie! **hugs** Trac

[angelzqq]

Thanks Trac *grins*. I'm never sure when I post these but I'm always glad I've posted them and finished that step, lol I'm glad you like the bantering. I was hoping it would be endearing and not annoying, lol *hugs*

[anonymous]

I loved the friendship between the women in Coop's life also. You totally have the Coop character nailed. He was always a hero and I can just see him rolling his eyes, and rubbing his head trying to get everyone to shut up. This is a great story. Thanks for sharing with us!--BettyB

[angelzqq]

Thank you so much Betty. I love that you think I've nailed Coop's character. That makes me happy *grins*. Thank you so much! *hugs*

[maurinak]

Go Buzz! *grin* You write Buzz so well. I loved how he took control of the room. Poor Coop, being backed into a corner like a frightened animal. *giggles*. That was a really funn chapter. I had a lot of smiles picturing all the women mercilessly tormenting Coop about his hero complex. I especially liked his conversation with Marina at the end.

Another great chapter, Sharon. Keep up the fantastic work!
~Emm

[angelzqq]

You're making me feel so great tonight Emm. Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you like the way I write Buzz and I'm glad you liked the Marina convo. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comments. *hugs*