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angie005

Journal Entries by Pepa and Silvia - PART 3

Aug 04, 2009 17:04

Part 3 of Pepa and Silvia’s Journal entries.. Comments are welcomed!!

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journal entries by pepa and silvia, los hombres de paco, fanfiction

Comments 16

lucysnowe78 August 5 2009, 02:03:12 UTC

"Maria Jose Miranda Ramos just ruined my routine. " oh Silvia, your routine needed to be ruined!!

I was so excited when I saw this story was updated. I love it! And I love that Pepa is starting to figure things out....

lenageek August 5 2009, 06:13:15 UTC

I LOL several times reading this fic - you have captured PepSi's teenage voices so accurately, especially with Silvia being a nerd at heart (who else would be so excited about anatomy - hee!) and Pepa being so overprotective of her pelirroja. Brilliant work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

booglebee August 5 2009, 08:01:29 UTC

Yay an update! This is one of my favourite fics right now. Made me laugh throughout the whole thing.

Silvia is an adorable nerd hehe.

kat_thelhdpfan August 5 2009, 08:31:34 UTC

I think that unfortunetely Lucas is 5-9 years older than Silvia & Pepa. And he was already a police officer when his papa "died".

But reference to the "Pelirroja's top 5 list" was so funny that it made me forget about those. ;)

raven_bard August 5 2009, 08:57:06 UTC

Silvia threw up on Lucas' shoes! - ROFL!!!! Oh classic. *snickers*

Silvia asking Pepa to hold her while she sleeps. - Awww! I can totally picture that. But now Pepa's conflicted...ooh the drama that's gonna ensue. I can't wait!

The next set of journal entries sound awesome! Driver's Ed? *grins* Oh yeah...lots of fun and havoc to be found there. And Pepa's first kiss with a girl! Whoo!!!