Journal Entries by Pepa and Silvia: Part 5

Aug 30, 2009 09:38


I just wanted to say, I really enjoyed writing age 17 of Pepa and Silvia. I felt the stories were flowing out of my head. There were so many ideas I wanted to use for age 17 but I realized that I should probably incorporate some of it for age 18, before Sara’s Communion.

Enjoy and Happy Reading! Comments are welcome at the end!

17 Years Old )

journal entries by pepa and silvia, los hombres de paco, fanfiction

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calleighsgirl August 30 2009, 21:45:22 UTC
Aw, that was so sweet. Pepa being the jealous one for a change.

I would really like it if you stick with the journal entries because this is what I love about this story.
If you write about the communion... well for me that depends on what's going to happen after that in your fic. ;)

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junebuggy01 August 30 2009, 22:48:50 UTC
Okay, this part made me lol- "When we were kids she thought the lungs were muscles in your legs because you needed “lung muscles” to create the motion to lunge! Geesh! Pepa was silly as a kid!"

And the labeling study for the test was so hot, in a tension filled situation way. I loved it. Angie poo, is it possible for me to love you any more than I already do? I'm thinking no.

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lenageek August 31 2009, 04:39:53 UTC
OMG, you had me cracking up at the beginning when I read that Pepa had signed up for all of Silvia's classes! And the almost kiss and the note dropping - how cute!

I enjoy all your journal entries and think you should write about the communion. Everyone's got a different take on it and I love reading about them.

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raven_bard August 31 2009, 09:19:28 UTC
Ahh teenage angst and confusion. The bane of every teen's existence.

This was a FANTASTIC update! That lil study session they had with the stickers was a great segue for that almost kiss...and funny too! This update was totally kick ass! I can't wait to read more. :-)

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selinakris September 1 2009, 20:24:26 UTC
I love reading this and I love the format you use it is very original, look forward to reading more.

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