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angie005

Pepa and the Baby (Part 3)

Dec 13, 2009 21:26

A/N - I had at least 3 pages for this installment and I thought I saved and transferred it on my flash drive properly. I tend to write on my laptop and watch television at the same time when I get a chance but when I went to upload it to my computer, the file name I saved it under did not have what was written. It was all mumble jumble jargon!!! So ( Read more... )

los hombres de paco, fanfiction, pepa and the baby

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angie005 December 15 2009, 04:05:25 UTC

lol
Pepa the horndog. I guess she can twist everything into sex. hahah

Thanks for reading and commenting!

vickiheartpepsi December 14 2009, 05:16:40 UTC

I LOOOVE IT!!! xD
defo. worth the wait,it was hilarious and...really?...silvia tasted rita's breast milk thats umm...*shivers* xD
but i thought u only needed to test the temperature on ur arm????...gosh..i'm as hopeless as pepa xD

well anyway..gr8 work!!! cant wait to c more from u :)

angie005 December 15 2009, 04:07:14 UTC

aww, thanks for waiting! =)

You can also check the temperature on your arm but I know some people who just taste it. I guess there's many different ways to check the temperature but I liked the idea I went with.

lenageek December 14 2009, 09:41:32 UTC

Hahahahaaaa! More Pepa and pelirojja and the baby! That should be a title of a new sitcom you could write - LHDP - A Pepa, a Pelirroja and a Baby! ;D

I started LMAO when I read that the bottle was gone - I just knew that someone was going to drink it - I though it was going to be DL - now that would have been funny/disastrous for our duo!

Love to see you around on LJ again. Can't wait for more updates when time allows!

angie005 December 15 2009, 04:08:36 UTC

hahahahahaha I LOVE the idea of a sitcom. Oh the things that would come up for that episode, the ideas would just keeping flowing!

Once again, thanks for reading and commenting! I'm going to have to run over to your LJ and catching on your fanfics!

pepsilove64 December 14 2009, 13:08:46 UTC

Hi, thanks for updating sorry for not commenting before
That was funny, love your fic it was worth the wait
Can't wait to read more

angie005 December 15 2009, 04:10:13 UTC

No worries. I love writing but hate proof reading hahaha, hench why its grammatically incorrect and so forth. I'm just glad there are people reading it so it doesn't feel like I'm wasting my time. But I love writing so either way I still would have wrote it.... probably not post it though =)

Thanks for reading!

foot_print_1 December 14 2009, 13:54:56 UTC

Just the pick-me-up I needed, loved the bit with Aitor and DL! *giggles* that was pretty fun to read.. Poor Don Lorenzo! People don't usually manage to make me feel bad for him, but you did it.
So far I'm lovin this, I really hope you keep going.

angie005 December 15 2009, 04:12:04 UTC

Hi foot_print!

I'm glad this fanfic give you the "pick me up" you needed! I love DL's character and his outrageous emotions. But if I was working at the precinct I would be a bit embarrassed also. But think of all the fun that would happen!!

Thanks for reading and commenting!!