Darkness, solitude and sadness were the only thing that could be observed in the neighborhoods of that majestic and impotent gothic castle; but near that place, by the small forest that limited with that zone, you could appreciate a light of which it was possible to feel hope, joy and happiness. That light came from a young man, of clear blond hair
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There are quite a few grammar mistakes but it didn't draw me away from the meanings in this story. Great job, your writing is very deep. ^^*
I'd love to see how good of a writer you are in your first language. :]
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if you know spanish or understand it i can give ou one of my stories in spnaish for you to read it
and thanks for commenting
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Sure, I understand Spanish pretty well. ^^* Thanks~
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That was sad :(, is Ruki going to become a vampire? O_O
There were a few grammar mistakes but it was really good.
I'd love to read your stories in spanish
<-----Mexican :3 English wasn't my first language either lol :3
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srry the comment above this one is mine xD
*Didn't notice i was logged off* -.-;
srry >.
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anyway XD
yeah, Vampire!Reita is a hottie <3333 i can clearly imagine him as a Vampire X3
it was sad, because i love SAD endings and Stories XD
yup, he would turn into a vampire, because Rei gave him some of his blood to drink
Ohh really are you from Mexico O.O cool
I'm from Venezuela XD
ehh, do you want me to send them to your e-mail or something?
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sure send em to jessi_jess343@yahoo.com ^_^
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sending them
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I like the fic.IFirst I thought ruki died, but reita made him a vampire, right?^^
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Really, do you also like HIM O.O cool XD my favorite song from Dark Light are Vampire Heart and Killing Loneliness <333 Ville voice is just so good, and he can even sing while he is drinking some alcohol and having a cigarette in one hand XD
thanks ^.^
Well in part he die, but Reita turn him into a Vampire <333
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Somehow I knew that Ruki will become a vampire but I just had to ask because I wasn't too sure^^
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this story won 1st place, at this year Challenge
i have two other stories posted over here at my journal XD
one is "Memories" that won 2nd place last year and another one that was an english homework called "Taion" XD
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