{145} Scared {SagaxShou} Chapter 6

[angie_valo]

Title: Scared
Chapter: 06/??
Author: angie_valo
Raiting: PG-13
Pairing: SagaxShou
Summary: How did Shou and Saga met?
Disclaimer: I don't own Saga, Tora or Shou TxT, if i did they would be tied up in my room and I would be marry with Saga-sama, and Riel-chan and Myself will be his spouses XD

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[unna_rainchaser]

yay for update XD awww this is awesome~

[angie_valo]

thanks ^^

[angie_valo]

i actually can imagine them doing that XD
thanks for reading ^^

[ramune_rockstar]

You actually have a lot of grammatical errors. I stopped counting. I'm not trying to sound mean by telling you that.

Do you use Microsoft Word? They have a spelling and grammar aid (though the grammar aid is not always 100% correct). It would probably do you some good to use it, or maybe actively seek out a beta who is proficient in English.

Other than that, cute chapter. Sort of a cliffhanger, though.

[angie_valo]

no don't worry, you don't sound mean at all. I already know about the grammatical mistakes, since i always make them either in English or Spanish.

Yes i do, i would try to use the grammar aid while writing the next chapter, since i already use the spelling one.

thanks ^^

[atsasukeral]

haha i laughed so much reading the last part of this chapter!! shou drunk seems like me drunk!! haha great update.

[angie_valo]

XD
thanks for reading

[take_pon]

kyak!! ><
i love taka_chan and Kaza_chan!!
so lovely nickname!!!!!

[angie_valo]

hehe ^^
thanks for reading
yes, they are really lovely nicknames XD