Sapid

Sep 26, 2011 19:46

\SAP-id\ , adjective;
1. Having taste or flavor, especially having a strong pleasant flavor.
2. Agreeable to the mind; to one's liking.
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keio, iliana, challenge, story

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writingpathways September 27 2011, 03:17:21 UTC
Iliana had only ever watched the festival from the castle balcony, seated next to her father. She recalled gazing out at the vast expanse of the kingdom in the darkness, dotted with orange lights from the villages’ bonfires. It was if the stars in the sky had been painted across the landscape.

Love this paragraph, especially the how the landscape mirrors a starlit sky.

And the end is great with Iliana having gulped down the drink all at once. Heh. Maybe she can drink Keio under the table?

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angimally September 27 2011, 04:08:55 UTC
Not sure she could actually drink him under the table. But, I have had an idea for years about her getting extra frisky after a night of heavy drinking. :)

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writingpathways September 27 2011, 04:11:25 UTC
Hee. That happens too!

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