Comments | angry_american: A short story, which has a conversation between three imaginary people in a person’s brain...

angry_american

A short story, which has a conversation between three imaginary people in a person’s brain...

Nov 13, 2007 22:53

Really, a very depressing story. You have been warned.

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angry_american November 14 2007, 18:15:00 UTC

DAMN! This was supposed to be an aquarius, ack!

lol

-FW

silverstorm2013 November 14 2007, 17:09:58 UTC

wow powerfull stuff. Speachless.

angry_american November 14 2007, 18:17:30 UTC

Thank you. I know it is not your way to comment on these things, but simply informing me that the power of a piece overcomes whatever intrinsic difficulties it faces really helps.

You know good fiction, sir, and therefore your opinion is most welcome. I am glad this was effective, and if it weren't, I would be glad to revise it.

cheers!
-FW

artefacture November 15 2007, 01:57:03 UTC

Brilliant & inspiring!

angry_american November 15 2007, 18:08:36 UTC

Inspiring what? I shudder to think ...

-FW

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angry_american November 15 2007, 18:09:26 UTC

Thanks.

I think it needs work personally but the idea is sound.

cheers,

_FW