V. Head First
Summary: Our foursome does some thinking about what these new revelations mean to their lives…
Categories: Veronica, Logan
Genre: Angst, Drama, General, Mystery, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Logan, Veronica
Author's Notes: Big thanks to
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I liked that you gave everyone's perspective. This whole thing is very hard for all involved. Breaks my heart that Stephen has known Logan isn't his dad. Poor little guy. Did he worry after his mom died that if Logan found out he wouldn't want him anymore? Breaks my heart!
“That might be a problem.” Logan’s declaration brought three pairs of eyes to him. He went to stand next to Veronica, facing Angelica with a self-conscious grin. “I don’t know if I can have my son dating my daughter.”
AHAHAHAHHA! That could only happen to Logan. Poor guy has so much bad karma coming back at him.
Can't wait for more. I look forward to the big reveal of "who's your bio daddy, Stephen?" You're not going to leave us hanging on who his father is are you. Although it would be sweet for Stephen to say it doesn't matter who my father is because I couldn't want for a better father than you -I don't think I cold be satisfied with that. Just being honest here. I need closure!
Also, I forgot Weevil had died, makes me sad again.
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I liked that you gave everyone's perspective.
*hee* I felt a bit like I was doing a scene from That 70's Show. I could see the room spinning in my mind.
You're not going to leave us hanging on who his father is are you.
Honestly? Probably not. But if I'm really being honest I have to admit that I'm not entirely sure how that storyline is going to play out yet. I have ideas, but my muse sometimes messes with them. You should see my original outline for this story...
...and sorry again for the whole Weevil thing.
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heh, that's an awesome visual.
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I'm glad you feel that way about Dick. I know he's, well, a dick, but I just can't help but like him. He amuses me.
As a die-hard Casey fan, I was also sad to see him go. (Missed him so much I had to go and write an entirely new fic about him even!) He might still show up for a guest spot - I think he and Angelica deserve a decent goodbye scene.
I'm fond of the dead cat line myself. : ) I'm rather proud of the Duncan/Mac pairing as well. I'm pretty confident in saying I've never seen it done before.
I really appreciate all your comments. Knowing people are so interested in where this story is going makes writing it all that much more satisfying!
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I think I forgave you killing Eli, because you made him into the good guy. Eli's definitely a better man than what he likes people to think.
And Casey.... I can see him and Veronica together, but I can't believe he stuck around for so long here. He's got a bit more dignity than that, I felt sorry for the guy.
Anyway, you've got me hooked, really hope you continue with this story. Although I'm a total LJ novice, so I have no idea what to do to make sure I'm aware of an update, short of checking your profile every other week.
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