Comments | anikun_wish_: Scrambled thinking, too late for eggs.

anikun_wish_

Scrambled thinking, too late for eggs.

Jul 26, 2004 20:45

I realize that my thoughts are coming out ( Read more... )

Comments 9

astranged July 26 2004, 04:00:31 UTC

you know you write well. very well infact, but i was surprised when you wrote 'fuck' you rarely say it, so i was taken aback. although it adds a rough edge.

zi_french_muso July 26 2004, 04:04:42 UTC

Jess has a point, actually she has several.
and well i don't exaclty know what is with cumshots. but you know u LOVE THEM. HA!

_the_last_kiss_ July 26 2004, 21:04:34 UTC

whats cumshots:|

zi_french_muso July 26 2004, 23:31:45 UTC

i have no idea who u are
but ill tell u when your older.. =p

astranged July 26 2004, 04:16:08 UTC

i liked the green , the red is overpowering

anikun_wish_ July 26 2004, 04:22:30 UTC

WHAT SHOULD I CHANGE IT TO THEN???

astranged July 26 2004, 04:23:59 UTC

lol, i dont know, i liked the green, it was calming...why not on msn??

emaris July 27 2004, 02:54:21 UTC

Did she write that song?

cadvan March 27 2005, 11:01:09 UTC

Wow, you are an awesome poet! you amke some really fresh unexpected images in that, they're really wonderful. I love the lines abou the man with the gun and the stingin words. And XD "Yeh, they all tell me that love is biology." I had a huge argument once about that with a friend. Anyways *claps* I've been wanting to read some of your stuff, and wow is it incredible