Heart Breaker (Prologue)

Oct 29, 2008 21:15

Author: Ani
Genre: Suspense/fluff/AU
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Chiitaro, Hikabu (friendship...ish)
Summary: Chinen barges into Ryutaro's life one day, but is gone the very next day, never to be seen. Until one day...he unexpectedly appears again. So what will happen now? And my summaries fail...
Word Count: 1,510 WOOT!! IT'S LONG!! YIPPEE!!! *dances*
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eemir_eera October 30 2008, 05:52:21 UTC
woooo..*i'm speechless*...but i love it..haha...^_^....Waa,shintaro and Ryutaro??..i love both..haha....^_^....But the title??.....T_T

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anilee0510 November 1 2008, 05:34:32 UTC
O.O Speechless? LOL Arigatou~

I DUNNO!!! WHY DOES SHINTARO KEEP SNEAKING IN??? NINJA LITTLE BRAT!!! >DDD

Um...title...*zips mouth*

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ain_chan October 30 2008, 08:52:02 UTC
ANI!! ANOTHER CHIITARO!! YAY-NESS!!

XDD yea~ why Daichan!!!! why???!!!! *locked Daiki with Yuto in a closet*
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

ne~ interesting! XD Morimoto kyoudai is there! KAWAII!! oH! HIKABU.. LOL! hikaru is afraid of cat.. XD

ne~ who's that guy who hit chinen?? i want to know!!

will be waiting for the next chappy~ XD

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anilee0510 November 1 2008, 05:37:06 UTC
AI-CHAN!!! YES!!! YET ANOTHER CHIITARO FROM ME!!!!! WHY DO I KEEP WRITING CHIITARO??? SERIOUSLY NEED TO STOP IT WITH THE CHIITARO...BUT MY MUSE JUST WON'T SHUT UP!!!!!!

I AGREE!!! DAI-CHAN TOTALLY NEEDS TO GET A CLOSET WITH YUUTO!!!!!! BWAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

I swear...I'm writing Morimoto kyoudai too much too...XDD I couldn't help but make fun of Hikaru's phobia.

Himitsu desu! >.<

Aw...I'm still debating whether to turn this into multi-chapter or extremely long one-shot...hmm...

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skytears9 October 30 2008, 18:05:09 UTC
Yayyy, a new ficcy!! OMG. Chiitaro is always super duper cute!! Especially if it's written by you. XD Awesome job! ^^V

I LOVED IT!! The suspense was REALLY GOOD!! I can't wait until the next chapater!! :DDD And Hikabu is always a funny pair!

The older boy had caught sight of the smashed castle. "Kocchan, look what you made me- KEEP THAT HORROR AWAY FROM ME!!!!"
Aww, Hikaru and his weakness with cats. It's ok, Hikaru! I'll protect you

"Ja~probably~" Ryutaro was about to ask him to clarify which question he was answering when he felt a pair of hands on his cheeks and Chinen's scent wash over him.
OMG. Chiitaro<3! This was a cute scene! *hugs both of them*

"I'm going to the beach now! And no, Shintaro, you can't come!" Ryutaro ran out the door before anyone could respond. "Bye!"
"But, why???" Shintaro whined, pouting from his seat at the table.
Kyaaa~ It's the infamous Morimoto kyoudai fights!! They're too cute! I sooo would want to see that caught on tape. XDD

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anilee0510 November 1 2008, 05:40:11 UTC
O.O Thankies!!! >.< *glows with happiness*

LOL, Hikabu is adorable. >.<

BWAHAHAH!!!!!!! *chucks a bunch of cat plushies at HIkaru* MWAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!

WHEEEE!! CHIITARO!!!!!! <33333

YES MORIMOTO KYOUDAI FIGHTS!!!!!! I really want to see an actual one...although it's probably a bit too selfish. XDDD OTL I CAN'T BE SELFISH!!! I NEED TO THINK ABOUT THEM TOO!!!! @.@;;

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anilee0510 November 1 2008, 05:42:53 UTC
I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!!!! O.O BUT...BUT...IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY!!!!!!! AND AND AND YOU WROTE THAT AWESOME CHIITARO FIC WHERE RYUTARO GOT JEALOUS!!!!!!! I HAD TO WRITE SOMETHING IN RETURN TO SHOW MY APPRECIATION OF YOU CONTRIBUTING TO THE SPREAD OF CHIITARO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! MY CHIITARO!!!!!! BWAHHAHA!!!!!!! *handcuffs them together*

O.O Actually...I don't even know what I was writing...I just thought it sounded suspenseful and wrote it JK JK, I have a vague idea of where it's gonna lead. XDD

It'll come...eventually...Guess I will make it multi-chapter then. LOL

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anilee0510 November 9 2008, 02:28:47 UTC
WAIT!! WHY DO YOU LOVE ME MORE?? EH??? @.@ OH WELL, THAT'S NOT IMPORTANT!!! XDDD

*HAS GONE CRAZY TOO* I SHALL KEEP YOU COMPANY AT THE HOSPITAL!!! YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY...MENTALLY UNSTABLE LOVES MENTALLY UNSTABLE!!!

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ksaiko_no_lady October 31 2008, 19:52:55 UTC
KYAAHHHH~! KAWAII DESU~!

Ani, you're so good at writing fluff fics. *gazes in amazement*

Aw~! Poor Ryutaro... And OMFG. DID THAT GUY/PERSON JUST HIT/SLAP CHII??

Nice fic! Can't wait for the REAL fic!!

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anilee0510 November 1 2008, 05:45:27 UTC
O.O BUT YOU ARE LIKE A FANFICTION MACHINE!!! *gazes back in admiration* I WISH I COULD WRITE FICS AT THE SAME SPEED AS YOU!!!!!

O.O Did he?? *checks* Oh lol, I didn't realize the wording made it seem like Chii got hit. XDDD It's more like when someone suddenly gets really close to you and you would automatically back up...although I suppose you can say Chii got hit too...actually...I like that idea...*evil smirks*

WAAAAAAH!!! BE PATIENT...UM...I DUNNO WHEN I'LL POST THOUGH!!! >.

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ksaiko_no_lady November 1 2008, 05:59:53 UTC
Oh, sorry for my mistake. *laughs nervously*

And I'll be patient! I can wait, forever if possible. It's okay, just take your time and post it whenever you can. :]]

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anilee0510 November 9 2008, 02:30:14 UTC
LOL it's okay. I made it too vague anyways. My fault!!

Hahaha, looks like it's gonna take even longer now? What with school and ect...I dunno...I'M SORRY FOR MAKING YOU AND EVERYONE ELSE WAIT!!!

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