Heart Breaker Chapter 1

[anilee0510]

Author: Ani
Genre: Suspense/fluff/AU
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Chiitaro, Hikabu (friendship...ish), Inoodai (?)
Summary: Chinen barges into Ryutaro's life one day, but is gone the very next day, never to be seen. Until one day...he unexpectedly appears again. So what will happen now? And my summaries fail...
Word Count: 1838 <--YAY!! IT’S LONGER THAN THE

Comments

[myztikk]

yay i'm first i cant wait to read this!!

[anilee0510]

Congrats on first! >.<

And yay! It's Yuma with a watermelon!!!

Can I just add he really looks like a girl in that pic?

[myztikk]

Omg what happen to Chinen how come he doesn't remember anything. I'm guessing it's something to do with that mysterious guy at the end of prologue? Suspense makes me go crazy. I can't wait for next chapter, I must know Chinen's story why he doesn't remember anything.

Here's the original pic if u want. ^^
http://img354.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pottop2bk0iy4.jpg
Yeah he really does look like a girl in the pic xD

[anilee0510]

Eh?? Spain Shonen Club?? O.O

Um..uh...*zips mouth*

2nd chapter will be posted...soon...maybe later today if I feel like it. XD

[eemir_eera]

waaaa...second chap..i'm waiting for this...arigatou ne...eh??..Chinen lost his memory ?Poor Ryutaro...^_^

[anilee0510]

Technically first chap, since the first one I posted was the prologue, but whatever. >.<

Poor Ryutaro with a happy face? O___O DO I SPY A FELLOW S??? XDDDD

[eemir_eera]

Haha....Gomen ne..I always mistaken a prologue as the first chap...hehe...Lol..i said poor Ryutaro with a happy face bcoz.......

Hey,at least he meet chinen right??..Who care either Chi lost his memory or what..huhu....^_^
Hey,at least he meet chinen right??..Who care either Chi lost his memory or what..huhu....^_^

[anilee0510]

XDDD It's okay.

Yup yup!! ^___^

[anilee0510]

O___O

I DUNNO!!!! *runs while laughing like a maniac* <--seriously, what is wrong with me these days?

BECAUSE I MADE HIM!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! *runs and smacks into a wall* Damn...I hate karma...>DDD

NEXT CHAPPIE COMING UP IN ONE YEAR!!! MWAHAHAHHAA!!!! <--gets send to mental institute

[ain_chan]

@.@!

WHAT HAPPENED?? CHINEN DIDNT RECALL THE BEACH MOMENTS??

EHH?? NANDE?? POOR RYUTARO~~ gahaha the one that looks like a girl rofl-ed at that..

XDDDD

love this! YabuHika friendship is dorky yet adorable.. XDD

[anilee0510]

Wow...people are reacting to the beach thing more than I thought they would...@.@ AND I LUFFLES RYUTARO IN YOUR ICON!!!!! HECK, I LUFFLES ALL YOUR ICONS!!!!! <33333333

XDDDDDDD INOO IS A GIRL!!! END OF CONVERSATION!!!! *ignores laws of life that totally deny this statement* SCREW THE RULES!! THEY'RE MADE TO BE BROKEN ANYWAY!!!!!!!

Yay!! Someone notices the Yabuhika!!! >.<

[skytears9]

OMG. I LOVE IT!! Kyaaa~ Hikaru is hilarious playing Pokemon. I would surely play with him. XDD

"But, Yabu-kun! Hikaru-kun told nii-chan to get the door!!" Shintaro complained, running out of the living room and down the hall to where Yabu's room was.
This is soo typical in a house full of teenagers and reminds me of my cousins. Aww, Shintaro is still such a kid. Can I please huggle him? XD

"And the one that looks like a girl...I have no idea who he is."
I knew right away that this person would Inoo. There isn't anyone else in HSJ who would be easily mistaken for a girl. haha

Quietly...plus all the noise the class was making, covered Chinen's next words. "At least...it was supposed to be the first time..."
ZOMFG. What does this mean?! What is Chinen up to? I WANNA KNOW!! LOL.

MORE PLEASEEEE! Super wonderful chapter!! It made me even more curious and wanting the next chapter.

[anilee0510]

*frowns* Am I hallucinating or is your icon Jiro? Or is that Calvin?

XDDD Hikaru and his Pokemon.

Teenage boys + house = absolute chaos

Pfft, could also be Chinen or Yamada. XDD

*shrugs*

[skytears9]

Actually, that's TOP from Big Bang. :D

Actually, between Hikaru and Pokemon, can I just have Hikaru instead? LOL. XD

That is so true! I have a younger brother who is fourteen and his room is a complete mess--that's more than enough evidence for me. haha

True, but Inoo is more girly. ;]

[anilee0510]

I knew that...I was only testing you...*not true* XDD;;; OTL

Pfft, sure, go ahead. *pushes Hikaru to you*

XDDD I'm 16 and my room is and always will be...a pigsty. XDD I'm just so lazy.

LOL, that is true. Although at times, he does act cute. XDD