Heart Breaker Chapter 3

Dec 09, 2008 21:40

Author: Ani
Genre: Suspense/fluff/AU
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Chiitaro, Hikabu (friendship...ish), Inoodai, Hikato (hinted)
Summary: Chinen barges into Ryutaro's life one day, but is gone the very next day, never to be seen. Until one day...he unexpectedly appears again. So what will happen now? And my summaries fail...
Word Count: 2107
Disclaimer: I call ( Read more... )

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personified December 11 2008, 09:30:31 UTC
GAHHH! Just what's up with the mysterious atmosphere of Chii and Inoo >___________<
I cant wait till the next chapter!

Can't wait to see what happens next *kicks*

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anilee0510 December 14 2008, 10:23:11 UTC
Mmmmnmhmm.....

Chapter 4's up

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anilee0510 December 14 2008, 10:24:12 UTC
LOL, first person to talk about Inoodai here. XDD

Yet another jealous! Ryutaro fan. XDD I sense a pattern here.

HAI HAI! *demands more photoshoots*

Next chapter's up~

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anilee0510 December 21 2008, 06:47:39 UTC
I did? O.o

Me too...jealous Ryutaro...T__T

*nods furiously* Seems there's already quite a bit of Chiitaro for '09 though...let's hope it lasts.

Yay! Enjoy~

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ksaiko_no_lady December 13 2008, 23:16:31 UTC
If I were Ryutaro, those girls wouldn't even be alive enough to even look at Chinen. ^^

"Usotsuki~!" Chinen grinned, skipping around him. "But it's okay. I like Ryutaro when he's jealous. Cho kawaii~" He breathed into his ear, making the younger boy blush insanely. Sometimes Chinen could really drive him crazy.

"Mou, Chinen-kun," Ryutaro muttered, secretly enjoying how the older boy kept making his heart flutter.

"You know you like it," Chinen retorted, right on the mark. Ryutaro inwardly winced, thinking he needed to learn how to hide his feelings better.

CHINEN TEASING RYUTARO??!! CHO KAWAII!!

And Keito is such a klutz <3

Can't wait for the next chappy!

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anilee0510 December 14 2008, 10:25:26 UTC
O___O Such violence...I like. XDD

HAIIIII!!!!!!!! XDDD Although it was really weird...O.o Who's seme?! Who's uke?! ARGH!!! *migraine attack*

Of course he is. That's what defines him as Keito.

Next chappy's posted~

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dachnayary December 23 2008, 10:42:53 UTC
Ani!!!! XD
Sorry for my late comment ne. I've been busy with vacation. lol
But I've read this already before although wasn't able to comment.
OMG! InooDai!!! *flails* Their moment together was soooo sweet although I feel something's strange with them and I feel like DAi-chan's in pain and so is Inoo. Inoo and Chii are suffering. *cries*

And JEALOUS RYUTARO is just PRICELESS!!!!! *imagines it* *flails* ANd Chii sure do know how to manipulate Ryutaro.... SOOOO KAWAIIII!!!!
OMG! It's all an act! I think it's not like that *wink* I really love this story and there's even HikaTo!!!!
ROFL. Hikaru makes Keito a klutz. lol *although he already is* *gets whacked*

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anilee0510 December 24 2008, 02:30:19 UTC
Renz!

It's okay, XDDDD

O______O YOUR INTUITION IS SO AWESOME!!! YOU CAN HELP ME WRITE MY FICS!!!!!!!!!

Of course he does!! XDDD He's always been manipulative!! XP

XDDDd THANK YOU!!!!!

YES HE IS!!!

cap abusing OTL

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dachnayary December 24 2008, 10:44:29 UTC
Ani! XD
Eh!? My intuition is awesome!? Hmmmm.... Come to think of it a lot is saying that I'm good in guessing what will happen to the next chapter ^^
And also gudiance test showed thatI'm an intuitive person rather than sensing =)

Ehhhhh!!!! I don't think you need help anymore. In fact I'm the one who needs help to catch up with b-day prsents and the com X_____X

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anilee0510 December 25 2008, 06:58:13 UTC
YES IT IS!! I LOVE YOUR INTUITION!!! XDDDD

*pats* I know the feeling...I fall behind too and it turns to hell

X____X

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anilee0510 December 25 2008, 06:53:19 UTC
Yay for reading >.<

Yeah, sad ne?

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