Heart Breaker Chapter 5

Dec 21, 2008 02:34

Author: Ani
Genre: Suspense/fluff/AU/angst (officially begins)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Chiitaro, Hikabu (friendship...ish), Inoodai, Hikato (hinted)
Summary: Chinen barges into Ryutaro's life one day, but is gone the very next day, never to be seen. Until one day...he unexpectedly appears again. So what will happen now? And my summaries fail...
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anilee0510 December 23 2008, 01:42:55 UTC
aehiohfioawhei!!!!!

Oh, I forgot to mention in the notes. Everyone seemed to love jealous Ryutaro so much before (was it the previous chapter?) I decided let him make another appearance. XDD

Um...sure...? Forbidden things are always so much more fun ne? XDDDDD *joins you in Love So Sweet*

O__________O I'M SORRY!!!! ...not *ducks*

*coughs* I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing...

Thank you for reading and the long comment!! I love long comments. >.

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anilee0510 December 23 2008, 01:53:56 UTC
*so spazzy she can't even remember what she wrote*

LOL, me neither. But it's fun to write about. ^____^ Makes up for what I don't do in real life. XP

XDDDDDD I love making people cry. -shot-

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ain_chan December 21 2008, 12:44:55 UTC
OHMYGOD! THIS IS SO MEAN!!

OHMYGOD SO KIND OF DAIKI! ^^

CHINEN KISSED RYUTARO! AWW SWEET!!

BUT BUT!! INOO!! SO MEAN!!

OHMYGOD! NOW I GET IT! THE TITLE!

INOO YOU ARE LYING TO YOURSELF!

"pain does feel nice"

i knew it! INOO DID LOVE DAIKI!

OHMYGOD!

Ani, you are the master of angst!

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anilee0510 December 23 2008, 01:45:10 UTC
ICON!!!!!!! <33333333333333

LMAO some kind of paradox? So mean then so kind? XDDD

YES HE DID!!!!

SWEET MISERY!!! *shuts up*

YAY!! SOMEONE GETS THE TITLE!!!! XDDDDD

OMG YOU CAUGHT THAT?? XDDDD

Now that I think about it...no one caught jealous Chinen....@.@ Except Jen...

O___O AM NOT! >DDDDDDDD Lies!

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eemir_eera December 21 2008, 13:44:58 UTC
huwaa......you update...^__^..

I love your Chitaro's part,ani...^__^..It's so sweet.....^__^

"Un, you just suddenly called me out here for no reason-"
"I'm breaking up with you. Is that a good enough reason?"

No!!!!..No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...*start to cry*...

I'll clarify something that I didn't make clear before: I never said I loved you back." He placed a hand over his chest where the heart was supposed to be. "I don't have this. None of us do. None of us should. It gets in the way, and it's a hindrance. Truthfully, I think the main reason why we do what we do is because of that.We don’t have a heart, so we want to destroy everyone else’s-"

seeing them suffer because we broke them gives us pleasure. It’s the one thing that makes us truly happy-"

Oh no!!..I'm so sad..Why Inoo??..Why???..Why you said that??...What happened to you??....Oh no!!...Poor Dai-chan!!.......Oh no!!!......

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anilee0510 December 23 2008, 01:46:24 UTC
Yup yup!!

Thank you!!

*coughs and looks away whistling*

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raichii December 21 2008, 14:48:40 UTC
Yay to Chinen for slapping Inoo!! Inoo deserves it. haha..

A very sad yet very sweet fic. hehe... good job ani =)

Can't wait for your next chappy....

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anilee0510 December 23 2008, 01:47:22 UTC
XDDDD

Thanks for reading and commenting!

And OMG!! Is that a stalker pic?! O______O

AAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!

X____________X *dies*

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anilee0510 December 23 2008, 01:50:17 UTC
O.o You don't like Inoodai?

Yes it was cruel! ^___^

O.o Robots? Interesting...I thought they were still humans...I think...I liked the secret dark agency idea though. XDDD Eh? What does that mean? @.@

YOU WRITE GOOD FICS!!! LIKE THAT HIKATO 'KANJI FOR AI' THAT I STILL CAN'T SEE ON YOUR JOURNAL!!! >DDDDDD

Yes I'm done. ^__________^ JK There's like...2 more chapters?

Awwwwwww...happy holidays back~

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anilee0510 December 23 2008, 02:07:26 UTC
Mmhm...very sad...*jacks the Pocky from Dai-chan*

MWAHAHAHAA!! I mean..ahem...^____^

O_______O WRITE IT WRITE IT!!!!!!!! XDDDDD A fic where there is a secret dark agency that makes robots for...what is their purpose? DUM DUM DUM!!! XDDD

XDDDDDD

UNLOCK IT I SAY!!!!!!!! >DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD WE NEED MORE HIKATO LOVE HERE!!!! OR ELSE I'LL GO CHANGE THE ENDING AND BREAK EITHER HIKARU OR KEITO'S HEART!!!!!!!!!!!

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