Prompt #: 55
Title: An Endless Blue
Rating: PG-13
Main Pairing/s: SeKai, mentioned past!HunHan
Side Pairing/s: vague BaekYeol
Word Count: 9k
Warning/s: Past character death, bad coping mechanisms, Kaiju war-related violence
Summary: In the Drift, Jaeger pilots share memories, instinct, and emotions. After the loss of his co-pilot, Sehun doesn't
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"he wouldn't want you to cling to his death so hard that you forget to live.” - I really liked this line ;A; and the part where Luhan confesses but gets killed immediately goddamnit ;A;
Even though ChanBaek was a side dish I still enjoyed them, hehehehe, esp their syncs xD and their 'behaviour' on return from missions (⌐‿⌐)
I've been long gone on this verse ever since I saw tumblr edits of EXO and Pacific Rim ;; thank you for writing this! ^^
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The fight scenes had a great fluidity in the writing, it made it really easy to visualize them. I especially enjoyed the scene where Sehun and Jongin are sparring. The writing had a grace that really reflected and enhanced the scene.
Sehun remembered that he had looked at Lu Han sometimes and thought he was ethereal, as though he himself came from the stars. Kai looked like the earth. He looked like summer days spent playing at the beach before the sea had become deadly. He looked like the boy next door who walked his puppies and waved hi to you when you stepped outside to get the newspaper. He was like the only thing this war hadn't broken yet, and Sehun would lose him, too.An especially beautiful bit of prose that stood out to me. Overall your writing has a great clarity, but depth of feeling. I really ( ... )
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Is this by an error or did I say something stupid? :|
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I see how enthusiastic I was about and after reading this fic xD
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