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#89: You Make Me Hot

Aug 06, 2015 09:43

Prompt #: 89
Title: You Make Me Hot
Rating: NC-17
Main Pairing/s: Chanyeol/Kyungsoo
Side Pairing/s: n/a
Word Count: 8288
Warning/s: MAMA powers, sex and swearing?
Summary: Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters never fails to be an interesting place. Chanyeol found acceptance here-friendship-even romance. Now if only he could figure out how to ( Read more... )

au: x-men, member: d.o, prompt: 89, member: chanyeol, pairing: chanyeol/d.o, rating: nc-17, round: 1

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jumpthisship August 22 2015, 14:50:37 UTC

yes it is i, the king of emotional whiplash ;D slight angst followed by sexytimes is my specialty. (not really.)

chansoo is my life okay kyungsoo caring so deeply about chanyeol hurts me on a deep level.

I'M SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS thank you soooooo much <333

anonymous August 6 2015, 17:01:59 UTC

:DDDDD made my heart soar :DDDD

jumpthisship August 22 2015, 14:50:46 UTC

:DDD thank you!

berryboys August 9 2015, 00:01:47 UTC

This was a fun and cute read! All the 'I have to be careful or I will set my boyfriend on fire because he's so hot' is just soooo Chanyeol lol. Kyungsoo being straightforward is +++ too. And I really liked that you showed the difficult moments between them, it always adds depth to the relationship, proves that they are more than a simple fluffy couple ;). It was still adorable though!

jumpthisship August 22 2015, 14:52:26 UTC

thank you so much!! i'm so glad you enjoyed it ^^
Chanyeol WOULD accidentally set his boyfriend on fire bc he's so hot. it was never even a question.
straightforward Kyungsoo is love <3
thank you for this comment ;~~; <33

shinealightrose August 11 2015, 04:24:43 UTC

Ice cubes and bowls of ice water - wow I love it!
Incidentally, the scene where Chanyeol accidentally threw a fireball at him and everything thereafter made my heart ache! In a good way though, when Kyungsoo was finally able to crawl back to him and say it was okay. Ahhhh.
This awesome, and cute, and funny, and sexy, and I love first time sex scenes where everything just kind of *is* lol. Hehehe.

jumpthisship August 22 2015, 14:53:34 UTC

i had so much fun coming up with coping mechanisms for chanyeol, haha. poor boy. needs to surround himself with things to put out his accidents.
thank you so so much! <3 i had so much fun writing this, as i'm sure you can tell xD

brittlepin August 17 2015, 11:05:03 UTC

omg I LOVED this! XD This was fun to read from beginning to end! :D

I've always loved the X men verse, and it blends so blissfully well with EXO lmao. I absolutely LOVED the characters :'D
Kyungsoo with his quiet and controlled self, but so straight forward with his words. And then gangly and insecure Chanyeol omg my heart bleeeeeds. and oh gwad they both had glasses! Kyungsoo with think frames ah my heart!!! Dx

I really liked the part where Kyungsoo expressed his affections for Chanyeol; laughing at his jokes, saving seats, looking for/giving him his fav foods
Such natural things kicking in when you're fond of someone :3 and when Chanyeol burned him and Kyungsoo was being pulled away "You're scaring him" I clutched my heart. This kid! He was just set alight and he's still worried about Chanyeol ( ... )

jumpthisship August 22 2015, 14:59:03 UTC

HELLO IT IS I

i'm so so glad you enjoyed this omg. thank you so much!
chansoo with glasses is so important to me OKAY. they both look so attractive in them *__*

also chansoo in general is just so ;~~~; they are such a weakness for me. kyungsoo showing affection to chanyeol may one day be the cause of my death.

AHHH THANK YOU, YOU ARE TOO NICE. i honestly had SO MUCH fun writing this fic. i didn't even mean to write it, but the image of chanyeol setting things on fire when he gets riled up was too tempting. i couldn't resist.

bless youuuu <3