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Title: The Newcomer
Author: Shirinal86
Name: Reyes
Species: Asian Stu
Hair: Probably dark, but I don't really care.
Eyes: Brown, but they turn red "like a vampire"
Canon Connections: Joins after David
Special Abilities: Can read minds, fly in "human" form, and morph.
Origin: Sigapore, Land of Vampires and Werewolves.
Notes: If it weren't for ( Read more... )
Author: Shirinal86
Name: Reyes
Species: Asian Stu
Hair: Probably dark, but I don't really care.
Eyes: Brown, but they turn red "like a vampire"
Canon Connections: Joins after David
Special Abilities: Can read minds, fly in "human" form, and morph.
Origin: Sigapore, Land of Vampires and Werewolves.
Notes: If it weren't for ( Read more... )
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He's kind of a stupid Stu, isn't he? "Hey! I know how to make friends - I'll lead the Yeerks right to the house of one of the not-so-Andalite Andalite Bandits I magically know about! Then I'll get myself caught and everyone killed and they'll just love me!"
I can't be too hard on the writing itself, though - the author is obviously a non-native speaker, and while that's no excuse for not getting a beta, I've written things just as mangled and thought that they were so awesome just because I'd managed to pound out a semi-coherent story in a foreign language. That said, I giggled every time he mentioned "darcon beams". ;D
Did you happen to check the reviews? The one guy gives the name "Smeagol Fasir Kenobi". Just kill me now.
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Why couldn't the writer (I type that word with reservations) have just down everyone in the world who cared about proper English and stabbed their eyes out with blunt cars? It would come to the same thing in the end, and save us all some trouble...
"Reyes" for red eyes. Goddamnit, I want to "darcon" this fucker to death already.
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THREE!
Eudyptes crestatus
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TWO!
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*dies and iz ded from shameless Giver reference* Is Cassie..apprehensive...by any chance?
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