Turn Me On, Wolf Man

[felinephoenix]

Why do I always find the Gary Stus? And what is it with them and Ax? Not that I'm against some Ax slash. This one's a real trainwreck of crazy, though.

Title: Outcast
Author: KesshiteName: Bor'ij-Enkou-Ezzrath

Comments

[wraithlord42]

Eep. Poor Fubie. I really should tell her about this.

[felinephoenix]

Fubie? Is that the author? If so...well, tell her that this community is for fun. Yes, we poke fun at bad stories, but it's all in good fun, we're really not trying to hurt anyone. Am I making sense?

(Though if she wants some feedback on how she could improve her writing, I'd love to give it.)

[malaikah_roy]

Change your whole story, add some more details, and stop abusing the word cute.

Sounds like a good review to me =D

[felinephoenix]

Sounds like a good review to me =D

LOL. Thanks.

[cygna_hime]

...My brains...

I think Ax would be more likely to pick up curse words from the TV he watches all the time. Poor Tobias, having to explain a)what they mean and b)why Ax is not going to repeat them.

Useful rule of thumb: If an OC's name contains an apostrophe, when their alleged culture does not use them, they are Evil and Poorly Written and must be Smitten forthwith.

[perpetual_poet]

I didn't read the fic, just the parts relevant to your jokes.

I <3 your sense of humor. *snickers*

Fubie says HI

[perpetual_poet]

La de datty dah.
People are so quick to judge shiz, can’t wait for an explanation, can you?
Nope, crazy Fubie and her crappy writing.Oh well.

Name: Bor'ij-Enkou-Ezzrath
Species: Andalite, I'm pretty sure.
Hair: Blue fur!
Eyes: No idea. Aren't Andalite eyes green?
Canon Connections: According to the summary he's been raised by "wolves" and is Alloran's son. Oh, and apparently destined to be Ax's gay lover.
Special Abilities: Really "exuberant" for an Andalite. Also, a pretty big kid, it seems. You forget, PSYCHIC, WooOOoOOO <~~ spooky noise

Re: Fubie says HI

[perpetual_poet]

I probably shouldn't have, some things aren't just meant to be known.
But I got my answer. Somebody who'd love me forever, some who's brave, someone who's strong. Some one that will always lift my spirits.
It sounded good. Something ideal. Until I was told that that someone would be another male. Something I've never even heard of before.
It scared me. Why was I to be the outcast? Because life sucks, Ax. Why did I have to be the disappointment, while my brother, a great war hero?
I told myself, never. I was in charge of my future, right? No. You're gonna the Ellimist's beeyatch, along with your fellow pawns. I decided things for me..

"Noo..Bor’ij’s bizitch, haven’t you been paying attention

Re: Fubie says HI

[perpetual_poet]

Aximili immediately bolted from his mother's grasp. Saying his farewells with only a backward glance, flicking his tail up and happy to be free

[anonymous]

*dies laughing at the story and the bold edits* Where is the whole story?