LJ Idol Week 2

[aniron_iorhael]

Come hither and I will show you wonders beyond what you’ve ever seen. Come with me, little mouse, and we will be quite the pair, indeed

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

A really well-written allegory of manipulation and betrayal, and what a snake may seem when a mouse begins to dream before the truth at last arrives.

That the mouse survives to see another day means that the mouse is stronger than most.

[aniron_iorhael]

With it came the desire to write something much larger, in this same vein. Something to help with real life past events.

It's certainly an easy thing to rationalize destructive behavior. But strength and wisdom are never found on happy days. Thanks for reading!

[dmousey]

Indeed to your above statement! I enjoyed this piece, and am pleasantly surprised to find the mouse still alive. Hugs and peace~~~D

[aniron_iorhael]

Haha! I can promise you, the mouse is certainly surprised as well. Thanks for reading!

[eternal_ot]

I LOVED this! Excellent work! Really well crafted. Kudos! *Hats Off*

[suesniffsglue]

This is one that will stick with me. Very nice job.

[my_name_is_jenn]

Very, very well written.

[mamas_minion]

I was hooked from the first sentence. I loved the use of snake and rodent to represent a relationship gone wrong.

[aniron_iorhael]

One of the work room posts talked about hooks in the first sentence and I took it to heart. Believe you me, I've felt like a mouse in the presence of snakes more often than not. Thanks for reading!