Week 3 Topic

Dec 13, 2016 21:43

A storm rumbled behind me and I had no idea. It was at my heels before I had time to even turn around. Why? Because I was deaf and dumb -- an infant in a body that demanded me to be more academic. They wanted quantum physics when all I could do was wail with a scrunched up face. I couldn’t open my eyes, and I didn’t want to. Who cared about the ( Read more... )

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marlawentmad December 20 2016, 03:43:27 UTC

This is a wonderful bit! I love a vague frame for readers to hang their own stories on.

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mamas_minion December 20 2016, 04:08:45 UTC
I like the flow of this and I like the vagueness, is this dream , is this subconscious dealing with dealing with a brutal reality. Very well done.

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eternal_ot December 20 2016, 11:20:34 UTC
Wow! This powerful. A packed punch in the gut. Well done! *Applause*

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