Week 7 Topic

[aniron_iorhael]

Light streamed in from windows lining a never-ending hallway; it was dark otherwise, an impenetrable darkness that was not malicious, but held secrets waiting to be discovered. A hand fingered along the walls, trailing along the smooth side. Stepping into the glow, a face peered into the window. The light intensified into a vivid recollection,

Comments

[j0ydivided]

I really love the imagery in this. Well done.

[bleodswean]

Sometimes the only way to go forward is to return to the past and find our original path again. Nicely done!

[halfshellvenus]

Fantastic imagery. I loved the sense that, if things have gone too badly, we might want to go back to beginning and start again, keeping more of the good and dealing with the bad with the help of knowledge we did not have the first time around.

[rayaso]

Great imagery and imagination. Your language sets a very definite mood, with an excellent conclusion.

[dee_aar2]

Beautiful ..... I loved the content of this and the way it progressed. As everyone said the imagery is striking. This surely is one way of handling an issue we cant seem to conquer ... going back to move forward. Loved it. Well Done.