Mars in Retrograde

Feb 02, 2007 07:39

Mars in Retrograde

Our feet trace curliques as we spin
across a dance floor. A haphazard rotating
of shattered light from the disco ball
is the only remnant of glory in the dark.

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blackpearl03 February 3 2007, 08:03:50 UTC
you should totally be the vocalist of a weird progressive rock band.

that would be awesome.

also, I think that would somehow work for a spoken word part in an emo song.

weeeeiiiiird

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anithradia February 5 2007, 21:41:27 UTC
would it be really nerdy of me if i told you this was one of the cooler things anyone has said to me?

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blackpearl03 February 5 2007, 22:41:42 UTC
awwwwww

I think that it actually speaks of the degenerate state of humanity, as you're really cool.

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